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[Today is Naruto's birthday. And because of that, he's in a pretty good mood while he wanders around his own apartment and looking through the journals. For some reason, he's expecting a happy birthday or two to surface, but he's content with just reading whatever the heck he stumbles upon while skimming.

That is, until he hears a noise coming from ( Read more... )

[If you're walking around the village today, and just so happen to be walking past any type of tree with leaves in a dense enough group that it would conceal a person hiding in them, then you're in luck! Because there is a Naruto hiding in those types of trees throughout most of the morning, waiting for the most opportune moment to strike.

And by ( Read more... )

Hey, what's with all the people? Is this like some sorta massive cycle, or just like a party?

[There's a ninja running around in the village today, mostly from roof to roof before taking breaks to hit up the ground to check out all of the people that are suddenly running around Luceti. He's hellbent on finding people he might recognize in the crowds ( Read more... )

[Up there! On the roof! There's a man clad in a green flak jacket (along with the appropriate navy blue shirt and pants) with a bright orange scarf wrapped around his neck, flowing behind him. He has a grin on his face and seems very confident in his abilities to do... whatever it is he does! Some may recognize this man as Naruto, standing ( Read more... )

Ugh... [There's the sound of stirring as the journal starts to pick up Naruto's voice. He sounds weary, but that won't stop him from complaining.] Can't the Malnosso at least give me somethin' to eat for all the trouble they put me through? I feel like I'm gonna starve!

[The sound of movement starts up again as Naruto mumbles beneath his breath ( Read more... )

Oi. Ted. Where are you right now? I've been thinkin', and I decided that I'm gonna punch you.

[All Naruto wanted to do when he got home was to fall into bed and pass out. He had his midnight snack already (sort of), and was already in his pajamas with his sleeping cap on. As he was getting ready to fall asleep after crawling into bed, he could have sworn he heard something. Something like... a monster? Under his bed.

That's awfully ( Read more... )

[The voice coming through the journal is a little distorted, as if it were coming through a mask. Yet at the same time, some might recognize it as the same as some jackass of a loud-mouthed ninja.]

Oh man, I am so sore... As if getting kidnapped by those stupid Malnosso wasn't bad enough, now I gotta haul this heavy armor through the forest to get ( Read more... )