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Chapter One is now up~!
Fan Fiction
Frozen Tears
by nacom202
Chapter 1
I couldn't believe that he was standing right in front of my eyes, nor could I believe that he was right there, chuckling softly as if nothing had ever happened in the past. I blinked once. Then twice. How could this be? Then something flashed,
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flushed JJ with a seducing Yunho is always very nice XD
it was so sad in the beginning, with JJ being so sad cause of yunho >.<
i really like it so far, update soon <3
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This came out wrongly! Wrong!
Eewwwwwww~~~!!!!!
+__+ now remind me that "I" here isn't some girl but Jaejae coz boys dont say thing like this... it's getting girly in here. (ya know how I drop it like it hawt if it's gender bending... oh gawd)
Despite a few mistake in the tense (using present tense instead of past tense in telling a story, more over the flash back), this is good. I like the last half of the fic... I'm actually surprised, coz in real life Yunnie shows his affection by hugging others, esp one he likes. I love it so far, please update soon. ^___^
I feel shitty +_+
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and...oops...was that gender bending? haha i'll work on that so i won't make jaejae sound like a girl (eeeeww) at least i don't make him cry "like there's no tomorrow"
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U think I'm not reading out of interest? I hate pity. Sure u do as well, so what does that tell u? I ain't doing it because of supporting family sake, since I've never done a good job on that anyway.
I like Jaeho, scratch that, I love jaeho~ You're writing in my interest hun, and more over I'm so proud of myself you 8D that you've converted into a Jaeho fan. Couldn't ask for more really. Wait, scratch that too, I want updates...
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i love it, please update it soon.
oh btw, how old are they in the present (jae, chun, su, min)?
and when did yunho die?
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i'll definately answer all of them *saves your comment down* haha
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it's so heart breaking at the beginning..i thought it was yunho too!!~poor jae..he's hallucinating..sure thing..he missed yunho so much i guess..i mean..who wouldn't?*sigh*
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and yeah, haha, i was having an angst build up when i began to write. i write to release any emotions i have XDDD and poor jaejae had to be my victim character. though, teehee, the yunho thing at first was gonna be real. but the thought of misleading people was just too funny! and yeah...haha, missing your true love really would be heartbreaking
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