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[nacom202]

www.winglin.net/fanfic/nacomfrozen

Chapter One is now up~!

Fan Fiction

Frozen Tears

by nacom202

Chapter 1

I couldn't believe that he was standing right in front of my eyes, nor could I believe that he was right there, chuckling softly as if nothing had ever happened in the past. I blinked once. Then twice. How could this be? Then something flashed,

Comments

[sexineko]

the flashback was really cute~
flushed JJ with a seducing Yunho is always very nice XD
it was so sad in the beginning, with JJ being so sad cause of yunho >.<
i really like it so far, update soon <3

[nacom202]

ahhaa, aaw thanks for the comment, really love it XD i never thought that people would call the flashback cute. cause that was when i had my writer's block

[sexineko]

spoooot <3

[lonekamo]

he didn't have any bulge in the pocket of his sweat pants
This came out wrongly! Wrong!

Eewwwwwww~~~!!!!!
+__+ now remind me that "I" here isn't some girl but Jaejae coz boys dont say thing like this... it's getting girly in here. (ya know how I drop it like it hawt if it's gender bending... oh gawd)

Despite a few mistake in the tense (using present tense instead of past tense in telling a story, more over the flash back), this is good. I like the last half of the fic... I'm actually surprised, coz in real life Yunnie shows his affection by hugging others, esp one he likes. I love it so far, please update soon. ^___^

I feel shitty +_+

[lonekamo]

I'm appalled. I'm not first? ahhhhhh~~~ ^__< You've got readers cousin!

[nacom202]

XDDDDDD i wouldn't say that. maybe they're being nice? XDD like you're not exactly reading out of interest....more like out of "oh it's my cousin...so just for simple support" haha
and...oops...was that gender bending? haha i'll work on that so i won't make jaejae sound like a girl (eeeeww) at least i don't make him cry "like there's no tomorrow"

[lonekamo]

you make jae cry and you have no tomorrow m'dear cousin! Like the title the tears are frozen! This is not cry me a river promising is it?

U think I'm not reading out of interest? I hate pity. Sure u do as well, so what does that tell u? I ain't doing it because of supporting family sake, since I've never done a good job on that anyway.

I like Jaeho, scratch that, I love jaeho~ You're writing in my interest hun, and more over I'm so proud of myself you 8D that you've converted into a Jaeho fan. Couldn't ask for more really. Wait, scratch that too, I want updates...

[a_azarine]

Wow...so sweet :) especially the hugs-thing.
i love it, please update it soon.

oh btw, how old are they in the present (jae, chun, su, min)?
and when did yunho die?

[nacom202]

lmfao hmm....maybe you'll get those questions answered in the next update since i'm like blank right now and have no idea either. but haha, thanks for pointing those questions out to me (love advice, love questions, love comments! XDD)
i'll definately answer all of them *saves your comment down* haha

[ara_niey]

ahhh~i saw this at winglin yesterday but didn't manage to read it.thanks for posting it here~^_^
it's so heart breaking at the beginning..i thought it was yunho too!!~poor jae..he's hallucinating..sure thing..he missed yunho so much i guess..i mean..who wouldn't?*sigh*

[nacom202]

haha i post it everywhere XD so i can get as many readers as possible whether they boost my ego or give me advice
and yeah, haha, i was having an angst build up when i began to write. i write to release any emotions i have XDDD and poor jaejae had to be my victim character. though, teehee, the yunho thing at first was gonna be real. but the thought of misleading people was just too funny! and yeah...haha, missing your true love really would be heartbreaking