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[nacom202]

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Chapter One is now up~!

Fan Fiction

Frozen Tears

by nacom202

Chapter 1

I couldn't believe that he was standing right in front of my eyes, nor could I believe that he was right there, chuckling softly as if nothing had ever happened in the past. I blinked once. Then twice. How could this be? Then something flashed,

Comments

[jaejoong_n_n]

the flashback part actually made this story a whole lot sadder,
since how they got together was so cute and romantic,
i really love the hug part, but then if i am jae, i'll be crying non stop remembering all of it, especially the hug part
poor jae~~~~ *pat pat*
next???

[nacom202]

aaaww, haha, thank you.
if you were jaejae you'd be crying? A LOT? whoa.......haha well you stay here to comfort jaejae while i update XDDD feel better?

[yummyfruit]

wats a bee line?

omg, this chapter ran good shivers up and down my spine.
I think..wow..
i dont even know what to say.
Yunho confesses and i wonder what jaejoong says. Becuase he does think about kissing yunho and stuff and then he goes like ewww.
and how long have yunho and jae been friends? and how old is jaejoong now?

[nacom202]

ahaha, whoa a lot of questions there.....THANK YOU~~!! XDD
a when you trace a beeline...it's like...when you look at the direction that someone is looking at and you slowly follow that direction. Like when bees in cartoons fly, they leave a trail of dots and lines to mark their trail. or for example when you cut something, there's a line for you to follow.

XD are you wondering what jae said? and about the "eeeww" part...XDD ignore that cause it was too much of a gender bender (don't know what i was thinking, omg)
i think it said somewhere that they met on yunho's first day of school as a new student
but i'll go into detail on that in the next chapter since you mention it
haha
thanks for commenting! (jaejae's age will also be revealed later)

[cereza_gakuto]

it's so cute *-*

YunHo and his hug was love :D

and JaeJae must say: YES! I'll marry with you xD

:)

take care =*

[nacom202]

ROFLMAO~~~!!! Marry? GOODNESS! You're like 15 ahead of the author herself!!!

[cereza_gakuto]

ahahahahaha xD

Sorry u.u *runs*

[nacom202]

ahhhhh, nu, don't run XD i need my readers!!!! LOL

[foreveruknow]

Ahh sorry I didn't commented on ur earlier post!!
Really love the flashback, it was so cute!!
So Jae was the one Yunho likes ^^
Hmm poor Jae, he missed Yunho that much~

Update, ne?

[nacom202]

ahaha, it's okay, as long as there's a comment i'm happy!! *sounding desperate*
But haha, if it wasn't jae that Yunho liked...who were you expecting? roflmao, who else to like?

i'll try to update soon...I need more inspiration and I'll probably just google random things to see what happens (since playing music doesn't really help anymore...)

[moon1084]

not a lame chapter at all! i loved it