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[nacom202]

www.winglin.net/fanfic/nacomfrozen

Chapter One is now up~!

Fan Fiction

Frozen Tears

by nacom202

Chapter 1

I couldn't believe that he was standing right in front of my eyes, nor could I believe that he was right there, chuckling softly as if nothing had ever happened in the past. I blinked once. Then twice. How could this be? Then something flashed,

Comments

[lonekamo]

he didn't have any bulge in the pocket of his sweat pants
This came out wrongly! Wrong!

Eewwwwwww~~~!!!!!
+__+ now remind me that "I" here isn't some girl but Jaejae coz boys dont say thing like this... it's getting girly in here. (ya know how I drop it like it hawt if it's gender bending... oh gawd)

Despite a few mistake in the tense (using present tense instead of past tense in telling a story, more over the flash back), this is good. I like the last half of the fic... I'm actually surprised, coz in real life Yunnie shows his affection by hugging others, esp one he likes. I love it so far, please update soon. ^___^

I feel shitty +_+

[lonekamo]

I'm appalled. I'm not first? ahhhhhh~~~ ^__< You've got readers cousin!

[nacom202]

XDDDDDD i wouldn't say that. maybe they're being nice? XDD like you're not exactly reading out of interest....more like out of "oh it's my cousin...so just for simple support" haha
and...oops...was that gender bending? haha i'll work on that so i won't make jaejae sound like a girl (eeeeww) at least i don't make him cry "like there's no tomorrow"

[lonekamo]

you make jae cry and you have no tomorrow m'dear cousin! Like the title the tears are frozen! This is not cry me a river promising is it?

U think I'm not reading out of interest? I hate pity. Sure u do as well, so what does that tell u? I ain't doing it because of supporting family sake, since I've never done a good job on that anyway.

I like Jaeho, scratch that, I love jaeho~ You're writing in my interest hun, and more over I'm so proud of myself you 8D that you've converted into a Jaeho fan. Couldn't ask for more really. Wait, scratch that too, I want updates...

[nacom202]

hahaha, yeah, i'm not that stupid XD i make jaejae cry and people shall bash me like there's no tomorrow XDD

and ...awww REALLY?!?!?! *glomps* yay!!! you're like jaejae then "i hate pity" haha.

you love jaeho? scratch that. you need jaeho....they're you're life now! pwa haha. and proud of me, WHOOSH! my sire is proud of me! haha updates coming soon. i just got a certain part but stopped cause of SCHOOL (ew)

[nacom202]

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD mianhae mianhae i've never tried to write jaeho and be jaejae before.....actually....haha oh nvm, no excuses XDDD i'll stop gender bending, LMFAO thanks for the advice unnie

[lonekamo]

hehehe... I like Jae's advice (or rather, your advice)

[nacom202]

ahaha, it's for your own good, jaejoong