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Chapter One is now up~!
Fan Fiction
Frozen Tears
by nacom202
Chapter 1
I couldn't believe that he was standing right in front of my eyes, nor could I believe that he was right there, chuckling softly as if nothing had ever happened in the past. I blinked once. Then twice. How could this be? Then something flashed,
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This came out wrongly! Wrong!
Eewwwwwww~~~!!!!!
+__+ now remind me that "I" here isn't some girl but Jaejae coz boys dont say thing like this... it's getting girly in here. (ya know how I drop it like it hawt if it's gender bending... oh gawd)
Despite a few mistake in the tense (using present tense instead of past tense in telling a story, more over the flash back), this is good. I like the last half of the fic... I'm actually surprised, coz in real life Yunnie shows his affection by hugging others, esp one he likes. I love it so far, please update soon. ^___^
I feel shitty +_+
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and...oops...was that gender bending? haha i'll work on that so i won't make jaejae sound like a girl (eeeeww) at least i don't make him cry "like there's no tomorrow"
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U think I'm not reading out of interest? I hate pity. Sure u do as well, so what does that tell u? I ain't doing it because of supporting family sake, since I've never done a good job on that anyway.
I like Jaeho, scratch that, I love jaeho~ You're writing in my interest hun, and more over I'm so proud of myself you 8D that you've converted into a Jaeho fan. Couldn't ask for more really. Wait, scratch that too, I want updates...
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and ...awww REALLY?!?!?! *glomps* yay!!! you're like jaejae then "i hate pity" haha.
you love jaeho? scratch that. you need jaeho....they're you're life now! pwa haha. and proud of me, WHOOSH! my sire is proud of me! haha updates coming soon. i just got a certain part but stopped cause of SCHOOL (ew)
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