In the Morning Mr. Kennedy Will Be Sober...

Oct 17, 2007 15:25

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lokei October 17 2007, 16:15:12 UTC
*snicker* Oh, Jack Sparrow, you do indeed get wittier the higher quality the rum. And Archie drunk is enough to tempt a saint, let alone Sparrow--however did he keep his hands off?

...and people reading a fanzine need to be warned about slash? *blinks incredulously*

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mylodon October 17 2007, 21:03:05 UTC
I don't write Jack Sparrow often, but he's an absolute pleasure when he appears on my page. For me I mean.

That warning did amuse me - I'd be happy for my daughters to read this. I mean, there's no more innuendo than in the 1968 edition of Round the Horne I listened to today and that was 'family listening'!

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sweetphaex October 17 2007, 22:13:21 UTC
*titter* Eeeeheehee! Drunk Archie is AWESOME.

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mylodon October 18 2007, 11:21:47 UTC
I should write drunk Archie again. he has such dignity....

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sweetphaex October 18 2007, 11:29:28 UTC
I suggest he and Norrington should get their bender on.

And then be forced to play Twister.

Nothing says 'dignity' like drunk Twister.

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mylodon October 18 2007, 11:32:27 UTC
Jack eats the ship!

I can't write Norrington at all.

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shezzawatto October 18 2007, 05:17:32 UTC
I know I've been so remiss in feedback, but just happened to have a mo to look at this. Hilarious!! I can *see* and *hear* Jack Sparrow. The dialogue, both internal and spoken, is brilliant.

Lines that made me snigger or laugh outright:

Jack had discovered the punch. And the champagne. And the gin.

a glorious creature in cherry coloured silk whom he had fallen head over heels in love with and demanded that she dance with him. Only the wonderful scarlet vision had doggedly refused to take the floor on the principle that, firstly, he was actually a papal legate
ROTFLMAO

fully equipped in the orlop decks
You come up with new ones every time!

I am at present sorely lacking in the boatty substances

Anyway he could not in all honesty back up Kennedy’s claims, as the pirate code actually made the kissing of French trollops almost de rigeur.
*snort*

He could see the ceiling straight ahead, therefore he was on the floor. He was on the floor, therefore he had fallen down. He had fallen down while sitting, therefore he’d probably been ( ... )

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mylodon October 18 2007, 11:37:18 UTC
###I know I've been so remiss in feedback, but just happened to have a mo to look at this. Hilarious!! I can *see* and *hear* Jack Sparrow. The dialogue, both internal and spoken, is brilliant ( ... )

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bauhiniakapok August 16 2016, 12:35:58 UTC
This has all my favorite quotes. I want to take Drunk Archie home and keep him as a pet.

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charliecochrane August 16 2016, 13:00:19 UTC
Don't we all?

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shezzawatto October 18 2007, 12:02:57 UTC
Gives you pretty French boy icon.

Mercy buckup!

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mylodon October 18 2007, 15:57:55 UTC
Ain't he cute? A sort of Archie-on-the-wing!

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hh_katie October 18 2007, 15:04:57 UTC
This was fun. I like drunk Archie.

I always figured that Mariette kissed Horatio and not the other way around and thus Archie would forgive him. I guess it took a little more than I thought.

Thanks for the smiles.

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mylodon October 18 2007, 15:59:04 UTC
Drunk Archie is such fun to write - that mixture of dignity and leglessness.

My pleasure to raise a laugh.

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