Ugh. Up way too late last night but I 1. finally got them in bed together. sleeping only at this point, but it's a start. and 2. figured out how to work the final scenes without having to write a lot of big actiony plot stuff. I think. What seemed like a good idea at 1 am may just be more smoke and nonsense in the cold light of day. Still, I think
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I agree on the Daddy stuff. Just that he told the story as, "He *confessed* to murder." is like a glaring neon light of unsubtle hinting. I'm guessing he confessed to somehow protect his partner/his wife/Neal. Sigh, plot really isn't the strong suit here but there's plenty else to love.
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Yeah, that was pretty much my response, too. *g*
Just that he told the story as, "He *confessed* to murder." is like a glaring neon light of unsubtle hinting. I'm guessing he confessed to somehow protect his partner/his wife/Neal.
Exactly.
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and yeah, they're really telescoping his dad's actual innocence. hmph, show, hmph. altho i don't think jeff eastin is necessarily a big fan of subtle.
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Sorry I can't be more help!
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We should totally go if they come back around! Because I really want to see them!
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