Sylar/Elle Fic: While Guardian Angels Watch

[mrstater]

Title: While Guardian Angels Watch
Author: MrsTater
Characters & Pairings: Gabriel/Elle, Noah Gray
Rating & Warnings: PG for mild sexuality and religious references
Format & Word Count: one-shot, 2752 words
Summary: On Christmas Eve, they go to church. With them for parents, Noah could use a little of the grace of God in his life. But after church,

Comments

[faded_facade]

I totally loved this story. And I nearly squee-ed out loud when I read that Gabriel and Noah had on matching outfits because I had this amazingly cute mental picture in my head.

[mrstater]

Can't you just see Elle digging the whole dorky watchmaker look and dressing them in matching outfits? I couldn't picture this scene with them dressed any other way, lol. So glad you found that squee-worthy. Hee. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment!

[codenameremax]

This was lovely! The imagery and characterization were both fantastic (and spot on!) This was just what I needed after a long day of finals. :)
May I friend you? I'd love to be able to be able to keep up with your stuff easily.

[mrstater]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback about the characterization and imagery, especially the latter as I'm really working to be a more visual writer rather than relying on dialogue all the time. I'm so pleased this was a good treat after finals (are you all finished for the semester now?) and absolutely you may friend me! But only if I may return the favor. ;)

[codenameremax]

Awesome, thanks so much! I am done with the semester, hallelujah! Senior year is kicking my butt.

[mrstater]

Aw, well at least you're half done with it! I had such a slacker senior year, lol. But that was a long time ago and makes me feel old. ;)

[cruiscin_lan]

Wait for it...
Wait for it...

*SQUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

This test of cruiscin_lan's emergency squeecasting system has been brought to you by mrstater's extreme fluff.

[mrstater]

LOL I'm happy you found this squee-worthy. Thanks for telling me. ;)

And that icon is seriously cracking me up. "Oops. Got me. That was a lie." I love that psycho...

[ulaylablue]

Oh my. This is so lovely! It is so sweet and you painted an amazingly vivid picture of their life together. It's incredibly atmospheric.

It seriously felt like reading a Christmas classic.

[mrstater]

Oh, thank you so much! That's a lovely compliment, and just what I was going for by setting this in New York -- technically I know they should be living in Cali, but there's just something so Christmasy about New York and walking home from church there on Christmas Eve, isn't there? I really appreciate your lovely feedback, and I'm so glad to know you enjoyed this little story.

[mrstater]

Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to comment. :)