Sylar/Elle Fic: While Guardian Angels Watch

[mrstater]

Title: While Guardian Angels Watch
Author: MrsTater
Characters & Pairings: Gabriel/Elle, Noah Gray
Rating & Warnings: PG for mild sexuality and religious references
Format & Word Count: one-shot, 2752 words
Summary: On Christmas Eve, they go to church. With them for parents, Noah could use a little of the grace of God in his life. But after church,

Comments

[jennifer2147]

This fic was just as sweet as peach pie. I just love this! The minor details you go into and describe is just pure awesomeness. The outfits, as someone pointed out, were perfect.

I just spent 13 hours in winter themed-Disneyland yesterday and I could totally picturing this family there... there were definitely little kids just like Noah there, some cute and some just darn annoying.

[mrstater]

Hee, thank you so much! I don't think of myself as much of a detailed writer, but very clear images came to me in this one, and I couldn't resist writing Christmas in New York with Gabriel and Noah matching. :)

Oh, I could see them at Disneyland, too! Maybe that's a fic to write for summer vacation. ;)

[jennifer2147]

I just adore excellent writers... I'm much of a reader myself. :)

Oh please write a fic in Disneyland! That would be the perfect place for the perfect family. Is it summer vacation yet?? Funny thing is, I might be in New York for summer break; ironic how I just might be reading a fic about California in NY, as I am reading a NY fic in Cali right now. I just love places. In general... lol.

[mrstater]

I'm actually going to Disney World in May, so it'll likely prove inspiring. ;)

[ateenwriter]

aww them going to church was so cute!
Jeez.... this should have been canon.... damn you writers!

[mrstater]

Thanks very much! I know it's not really canon, but that room Gabriel had in his apartment that said "forgive me" and "I have sinned" made me wonder if he has a religious background, and I wanted to include something like that in a fic sometime.

And it can still be canon -- there's that whole alternate future! ;)

[superkappa]

A lovely story. It was very sweet and cute, and funny at the same time. The peach pie was a nice touch :D

[mrstater]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment! I had a lot of fun writing this. Sylar and Elle may be crazy, but they do have potential to be an adorable little family. ;) And I'm in love with the idea of him being a total peach pie junkie. :)

[superkappa]

I like the idea of him being a baked goods junkie in general. Pie, cake, he clearly loves it all. Peach just happens to be his favorite :)

[jess_ucv]

Aw!! So sweet!! My Christmas mushiness is satisfied!

[mrstater]

Yay, I'm so happy to satisfy your Christmush wish. ;) Thanks for reading and commenting.

[speccygeekgrrl]

OH MY GOD. This is so unbearably, beautifully adorable. ♥ ♥ ♥

[mrstater]

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun writing it. :)