Sylar/Elle Fic: While Guardian Angels Watch

Dec 19, 2008 09:18

Title: While Guardian Angels Watch
Author: MrsTater
Characters & Pairings: Gabriel/Elle, Noah Gray
Rating & Warnings: PG for mild sexuality and religious references
Format & Word Count: one-shot, 2752 words
Summary: On Christmas Eve, they go to church. With them for parents, Noah could use a little of the grace of God in his life. But after church, ( Read more... )

character: gabriel gray (sylar), fandom: heroes, character: elle bishop, character: noah gray

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catyuy December 19 2008, 15:47:06 UTC
Lovely.....But isn't B-I-C-Y-L-E-S missing a C.

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mrstater December 19 2008, 15:55:28 UTC
Nope, no missing C. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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dragynflies December 19 2008, 15:55:00 UTC
Awww, this was so cute. I love Little Noah and all his questions, and this:

Someday Noah will learn that the only thing his father has in common with angels is his name (and the ability to fly), but he'll also know that Daddy is Santa Claus, and stayed up all night to put together his first bike, and maybe that will make all the difference.

Was so exactly right. Awwww.

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mrstater December 19 2008, 18:50:55 UTC
I know we didn't see much of Little Noah in 3x4, but coming from Gabriel, he just struck me as the kind of little kid who'd be a question machine, even more than most kids are. And I could see Gabriel loving how his son is cut from the same cloth as him, but Elle being totally exasperated. It was so much fun to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading him; I'm always paranoid when I write little kids they'll just be too precocious and therefore annoying, lol.

Thanks so much for your comments on that line, too; As usual I got to the end and panicked about how to wrap it all up without becoming cheese.

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jncar December 19 2008, 15:57:41 UTC
Awww! So sweet!

I love the idea of them having such a wonderful normal life together. And Noah's incessant questions about the angels are great--naturally Gabriel's son will be full of curiosity.

Great Christmas fic. :)

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mrstater December 19 2008, 18:54:49 UTC
I love the angst and psychoness that is Sylar and Elle, but couldn't resist playing with the 3x4 alternate future and giving them a bit of Christmas fluff. If you can't write fluff at Christmas, when can you? ;)

Glad you agree that little Noah wouldn't fall far from the tree. ;) He didn't have many lines in 3x4, but that one little answer he gave, that "Abracadabra" is the magic word, really screamed "miniature smarty pants just like his father" to me.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm so happy you liked, as I know you were wanting to read some happy family fic!

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stefichan December 19 2008, 16:27:28 UTC
Ohhh myyyy GOOOOOODDDD....

This was beyond adorable in every way.

I love this.

+mems

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mrstater December 19 2008, 18:55:32 UTC
Aw, thank you so much for reading, commenting, and adding to memories! That totally makes my day. :D

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havemy_heart December 19 2008, 16:55:10 UTC
I love this so much! This is everything that I wanted for them. I love their cute little family :)

Definitely going in the mems!

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mrstater December 19 2008, 18:56:48 UTC
I'm so glad we have that alternate future to play with in fic! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm so happy to know you felt I captured the way the Gray family would roll. It would be a fun place to be if they could get over their crazy issues!

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