Fic: ‘goodbye, my friend’

[morethanacandle]

Title: goodbye, my friend
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: (PG)
Time Period: tPM: during the celebrations at the end.
Summary: Friends don’t fool friends.

Author's Note: This is quick ‘n’ dirty (for definition see the F. A. Q.).

In order:
when first they meet
goodbye
an unspoken apology

DisclaimerAll characters contained herein are the intellectual

Comments

[arliddian]

I think the thing I like about their conversation is that they're so... mature. And much is communicated in what they don't say as much as what they do say. Very different to how either of them talk to, say, Anakin.

Another lovely moment in their enigmatic relationship. <3

[morethanacandle]

Another lovely moment in their enigmatic relationship. <3
Thank you! It’s been interesting to see what comes next.

Very different to how either of them talk to, say, Anakin.
I’d not realised that but yes, it is very different from how they’d speak to Anakin.

[armchairdm]

Oh. Wow. This is simply beautiful. Very sad though; thinking of what Padme has had to give up; and no-one is the wiser (except for Obi; and the Jedi in general I suspect).

[morethanacandle]

Maybe that's why they speak as they do?

[hsv_fangirl]

lovely, sad, hopeful. You captured a lot in a short piece. Nice series. I really like how she knew Obi-Wan's pain even if it was subtle to see.

[morethanacandle]

Thank you.

Nice series.
And thanks again; it surprised me by the way it's popped up.

[emiv]

She can see the shadows within his blue eyes that weren’t there before

I really liked this part; lovely and subtle.

It is a very nice 'in-between' piece, and flows nicely from the last one. :)

[morethanacandle]

I really liked this part; lovely and subtle.
Thank you.

It is a very nice 'in-between' piece, and flows nicely from the last one. :)
This relieves me to know; I wasn’t quite sure if it’d fit.