Fic: ‘when first they meet’

May 28, 2012 00:04

Title: when first they meet
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: (G)
Time Period: tPM: during the flight from Naboo.
Summary: She is certain this is retaliation!

Author's Note: This is quick ‘n’ dirty (for definition see the F. A. Q.).

This comes well before goodbye and an unspoken apology.

DisclaimerAll characters contained herein are the intellectual ( Read more... )

film(s): star wars, character: padmé amidala, character: obi-wan kenobi

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armchairdm May 27 2012, 14:45:25 UTC
Heh. This is amusing. Very well written.

I do want to know her unfinished sentence about revenge at the beginning though...

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morethanacandle May 28 2012, 00:42:40 UTC
Thank you.

And we may never know what that sentence refers to.

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arliddian May 27 2012, 23:11:40 UTC
I love it. Very sweet and simple, with a tiny hint of something more down the line.

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morethanacandle May 28 2012, 00:43:28 UTC
Thank you!

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emiv June 8 2012, 00:48:58 UTC
TPM!Padme/Obi-Wan is probably my favorite version of them, for some reason. It is just so under-explored and has such potential, so I am glad you've taken us back there briefly! :)

“Your names sound so similar

I love that you pointed this out, because that is VERY true, and as such, his unsure-ness as to her name is quite realistic.

Overall, this was very sweet and nicely leads into further exploration of the two. :)

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morethanacandle June 8 2012, 02:08:04 UTC
It is just so under-explored and has such potential, so I am glad you've taken us back there briefly! :)
It’s one of my favourite times for them but one I rarely, if ever, explore.

I love that you pointed this out, because that is VERY true
Very, VERY true! I didn’t think I’d be the only one who noticed how similar their names are!

Overall, this was very sweet and nicely leads into further exploration of the two. :)
Thank you. This felt like a good beginning for them, for this series of stories.

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