I know I'm awfully late and have no excuse for that but… I always keep my promises and I did say I'd write you a long comment that would make up for the wait I hadn't planned to make you wait that long though.. if u were even waiting anyway /shot Well the long comment when kinda... overboard... and became, well, commentS /bricked.... sorry? *cough*
First, I shall thank you. I didn't have the luxury of time to sit and re-read it in one go, even when I was so frustrated every time I had to halt, but your fic kept me entertained the past few days while I was between hospitals, uni and work ♥
Anyway, get ready to be spammed~
*takes deep breathe*
The way you began the fic set the mood perfectly and is so captivating, making us readers to find out more, to know what happened, what is behind those thoughts Kame have and this new beginning. It sets the angst as well even when there's nothing unhappy about that little prologue… but there are sentences like those instead:
"It was almost there. Almost within his reach, and it felt like
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Nakamaru the thoughtful and wise man ♥ I like that he understands how difficult it could be for Jin and didn't blame him like Koki for the words he said, but considered his position and the shock of having found out everything that way, years later, and with the news of him returning to KAT-TUN. I mean that's a lot for one day !! At least someone who actually took into consideration Jin's feelings!
But, I did like Koki's words too, because at the same time, when you take in mind KAT-TUN and Kame's position, Jin again appeared like an asshole almost blaming Kame of fucking up his career and life even though I still stubbornly stand in my point that he didn't really mean it xD
The next part with Jin was really heartbreaking… but it allowed us to comprehend Jin as well. He's been through a lot as well to be able to stand where he was, to make himself recognized for his talent and now, they're taking everything away just because they could.. that particular sentence was so painful. It's like everything he's done was for nothing… a
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First, I shall thank you. I didn't have the luxury of time to sit and re-read it in one go, even when I was so frustrated every time I had to halt, but your fic kept me entertained the past few days while I was between hospitals, uni and work ♥
Anyway, get ready to be spammed~
*takes deep breathe*
The way you began the fic set the mood perfectly and is so captivating, making us readers to find out more, to know what happened, what is behind those thoughts Kame have and this new beginning. It sets the angst as well even when there's nothing unhappy about that little prologue… but there are sentences like those instead:
"It was almost there. Almost within his reach, and it felt like ( ... )
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But, I did like Koki's words too, because at the same time, when you take in mind KAT-TUN and Kame's position, Jin again appeared like an asshole almost blaming Kame of fucking up his career and life even though I still stubbornly stand in my point that he didn't really mean it xD
The next part with Jin was really heartbreaking… but it allowed us to comprehend Jin as well. He's been through a lot as well to be able to stand where he was, to make himself recognized for his talent and now, they're taking everything away just because they could.. that particular sentence was so painful. It's like everything he's done was for nothing… a ( ... )
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