Blind (Domlijah) PG-13 (8/?)

[moit_fics]

Title: Blind - 8/?
Author: moit
Pairing: Domlijah
Fandom: Lord of the Rings RPF
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Drama
Warnings: Slash, violence
Summary: After a horrific accident, Elijah is blinded. Dom is left to pick up the pieces of their broken life.
Word Count: 1,597
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Comments

[randomdarling]

"Some days I’m not sure I still love the person he’s become."

That line is just the saddest thing! I know that Dom's frustrated with Elijah, but that is harsh. Thanks for updating this story, I really like the emotions you put through in your writing. :)

[moit]

Awe! I didn't mean for that to be so sad, but I'm really glad it packed a punch.

Thanks so much for reading!

[addie71]

What a great chance for Elijah if he can only get over himself enough to try to work again.

In spite of the bickering, I think Josh is good for Elijah. And if Dom starts therapy that will help him and if it get Elijah to go too - more the better.

[moit]

*snorts* If Dom can get Elijah to go . . .

Sorry, meta moment there. :D

Thanks for reading!

[romeny]

It's good to talk things out and Matt and Josh are making D & E do just that. I think Elijah needs therapy for his resentment about his condition; his anger is seeping out and destroying what he has with Dom.

[moit]

Talking is precisely Josh's purpose. He isn't going to stand for tension between Elijah and Dom. He probably won't leave until they work out some of their issues.

I definitely thinking Elijah's anger is tearing everything in his life apart, including himself.

I really like that observation. :)

Thanks for reading!

[verangel]

I am using daughter's old wee laptop. My dongle gave out again...fucker. Elijah is finally peaking out a bit. He has so meany physicical and emotional obsticals he's dealing with. I can understand Dom being caught in the middle but damn...he kinda gives up in this chapter. He disappointed me

[moit]

Well I'm glad you can Internet. *pats*

I'm so sorry Dom disappointed you! D: Think of Dom like this: He's got himself, yeah? And everyone has personal pressure to deal with. Put onto that being away from home, (like REALLY FAR, coz he's from England) working a new gig far from your FOSTER home (continental States), and to top it off, your boyfriend has been blinded and is now sinking into a very dangerous depression. Would you feel the need to give up at times? *nods seriously*

I think you should take another look at Dom . . why can Elijah change and Dom not? Would not Elijah's accident have SOME impact on Dom? He can't just be a solid rock FOREVER. He's human, too. :)

Loved this feedback, darling. Thank you so much!!

[lijahlover]

What a chapter so much tension.

I feel Dom and Elijah's frustration counceling might be a good idea even if just Dom goes.

[moit]

It's so funny because I don't think about the TENSION I'm creating; I just write the story. LOL

Yes, Dom will probably go to a therapist. Elijah will, no doubt, fight him tooth and nail every step of the way.

Thanks for reading!