DEFIANT EYES, ANGRY MOUTH: 11. Metamorphosis PART A
”I can’t find it!”
”Well search better, it has to be there somewhere.”
“Dear god, I’m searching for a damn DICK here. Is this really a job of a guardian?!”
“If you cannot find the dick, you can give up the dreams of finding the prostate.”
“Oh dear god….”
It was well past afternoon and Sungmin had been standing in the stuffy classroom since 8 am, ( Read more... )
”Well search better, it has to be there somewhere.”
“Dear god, I’m searching for a damn DICK here. Is this really a job of a guardian?!”
“If you cannot find the dick, you can give up the dreams of finding the prostate.”
“Oh dear god….”
It was well past afternoon and Sungmin had been standing in the stuffy classroom since 8 am, ( Read more... )
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Thx a lot for updating ^^
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First of all ~~~ thank you for updating XD
I was craving over good fics these days. Reading would always be my addiction. And no good fics to read was absolutely torturing me TT~TT
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Kinda surprised that the opening of this chapter is Kyuhyun and Sungmin interaction. Both of them seemed always bickering but I sensed that this relationship will move to a special way (not exactly special - dunno how to express it >_Hankyung - Sungmin - Heechul thingy has spread over at school. So most of the student hate Sungmin ( ... )
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This top-bottom thing will be explained in the later chapters :DDD hehehe
LoL I liked the dance studio part very much, partially because of Hankyung and Sungmin's dialogua :DD I finally got to write about their relationsbip properly!
And the military force -part will also come in later ;)
thanks thanks, I tried to make it better than the previous one : DD
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anyways now it makes a little bit more sense XD love this part also! it really shows how sungming has accepted his duty as a guardian. even though he is scared he still tries :D
and aaawwwhhhh sweet hankyung watching over sungmin even if he exhausts himself!!
wow the chapter is even bigger that I thought! very impressive! :D thank you so much!
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I wanted to make this chapter about the change Sungmin experiences with his interaction with Hankyung and that was the reason the chapter was named metamorphosis : ))Sungmin grows up in this quite a lot!!
hahaha, I'll answer your comment for part B XD
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I love you, you and your story.
I have a lot of things to say so... I'll make a nice comment and post it during the week ^^.
Congratulation for this long and wonderful chapter <3
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“If you cannot find the dick, you can give up the dreams of finding the prostate.”
It was one of the most confusing beginning I ever read <3. During a few seconds, I thought that Sungmin was experimenting his search with someone real... But I knew at the same time it was impossible. I love that dialogue ( ... )
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“It’s called growing up.”
I'm so proud of him <3 ( ... )
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You have no idea how much I'd just like to fast forward the boring parts to the better parts and sometimes I get so pissed that my writing goes down the toilet and i have to write that specific part again later :__D i don't actually like prepare-prepare any of the chapters, I just think them through in my mind and when i write them down, I ad some details here and there and that's partially the reason why i miss those small details so often later on XDXD lol So don't take any of my advice in writing XD
hahah, they are so screwed. Evil author here...hehehhe
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