DEFIANT EYES, ANGRY MOUTH: 11. Metamorphosis PART A
”I can’t find it!”
”Well search better, it has to be there somewhere.”
“Dear god, I’m searching for a damn DICK here. Is this really a job of a guardian?!”
“If you cannot find the dick, you can give up the dreams of finding the prostate.”
“Oh dear god….”
It was well past afternoon and Sungmin had been standing in the stuffy classroom since 8 am, ( Read more... )
”Well search better, it has to be there somewhere.”
“Dear god, I’m searching for a damn DICK here. Is this really a job of a guardian?!”
“If you cannot find the dick, you can give up the dreams of finding the prostate.”
“Oh dear god….”
It was well past afternoon and Sungmin had been standing in the stuffy classroom since 8 am, ( Read more... )
First of all ~~~ thank you for updating XD
I was craving over good fics these days. Reading would always be my addiction. And no good fics to read was absolutely torturing me TT~TT
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Kinda surprised that the opening of this chapter is Kyuhyun and Sungmin interaction. Both of them seemed always bickering but I sensed that this relationship will move to a special way (not exactly special - dunno how to express it >_<).
Hankyung - Sungmin - Heechul thingy has spread over at school. So most of the student hate Sungmin?
Does Kyu have any guardian? can he survive without guardian? It means wolves are not always paired with guardian and can live independently?
I really like Kyu's character in this chapter. Care but not showing it openly. Ermm...cool style? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ or maybe more like hater style... XD
The meeting with Zhoumi and Siwon...
When both of these character appeared in this fic, I believed that Siwon was the wolf. But it turned out the way that I didn't expect at all. Coz at first I got the mindset that the male was the wolf and the female was the guardian in this male-male relationship.
And from this part, can I assume that in human form, we almost can't differentiate human and wolf in human form?
HanMin moment in the dance studio...
This part showed how much Hankyung care of Sungmin. "Is your hand okay?","I've been on night watch. ... To watch out for you.","Sungmin. You are forcing yourself to do this." I'm pretty envying Sungmin here. How Hankyung gave him attention was wonderful. Such a gentleman style ~~~ *like Donghae said before.
And Min repaid it equally."Your whole face screams of sleep deprivation. What's the problem?"
You cracked me up with these :
"Y-you'd actually let me sleep in the same room as you?! in the same ROOM when you normally don't even let me hug you?" - XD LOL - He asked to sleep in Min's room indirectly but got shocked a lot when he got what he wanted.
"...Who are you and what have you done to Sungmin?" ROFL XD
Hankyung smelled like forest - only with one sentence you can describe how Sungmin found comfort in Hankyung. >///,///<
About the military forces, why the wolves were wary of it?
You did a VERY GOOD JOB in this chapter. *claps - moved to part B :D
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This top-bottom thing will be explained in the later chapters :DDD hehehe
LoL I liked the dance studio part very much, partially because of Hankyung and Sungmin's dialogua :DD I finally got to write about their relationsbip properly!
And the military force -part will also come in later ;)
thanks thanks, I tried to make it better than the previous one : DD
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