The Man Who Falls (9/10)

[mithen]

Title: The Man Who Falls (9/10)

Pairing/Characters: Clark/Bruce, Jack Ryder, Alfred Pennyworth, Harleen Quinzel, Barbara Gordon, Jim Gordon
Rating: R for violence
Warnings:  None needed
Continuity: The Dark Knight/Superman Returns crossover; a continuation of Leap of Faith.
Word Count:  5000Summary:  Clark Kent arrives in Gotham after the events

Comments

[iccanox]

Oh MAN! that was so dang awesome! I want to watch it! this should be a movie! its sooooo goood!!!
I was so happy when he had said he didnt need any stinking help I did the I cant dance but im happy shake! :)
its not a pretty sight but needs must!
loved it cant wait for more!
thank you for posting the epic awesome..
and thank you damos for your awesome beta talents :)

[mithen]

I want to watch it!

I wish I had a movie of how I saw it my head, to be honest! It was so vivid and hard to capture in words sometimes...

I was so happy when he had said he didnt need any stinking help I did the I cant dance but im happy shake! :)

Hee, aww, thanks! Boy, I'd been looking forward to that moment for SO LONG.

damos deserves a medal for this one, I think! He's the best!

[yyjjopjel]

I love this story very much, I mean it, even I'm still learning English. OK, to be honest, there're many words I need to check out with dictionary so that I can make sure the meanings (>_<)
I love it very much... (oh, god, I can't find other more beautiful words to tell you that OTL...)
This is my first comment in LJ, and I hope I didn't make any mistakes...
~~~~(>_<)~~~~

[mithen]

I love this story very much, I mean it, even I'm still learning English. OK, to be honest, there're many words I need to check out with dictionary so that I can make sure the meanings (>_<)

I am always of the view that one of the best ways to learn a language is to find something you enjoy in it! So I'm tickled my stories can be your textbook. :)

I know how hard it is to comment in a different language and how frustrating it can be to have thoughts that you can't express subtly, so I really appreciate you taking the effort! Thank you!

[gogglehead84]

Aww, now secrets are out and romance is hopefully imminent. This was a great chapter I am glad Clark was able to figure it out though Bruce's "code" of course Alfred helped a bit too.

[mithen]

Romance is very definitely in the air! I got really annoyed while writing this chapter because there wasn't enough romance, boo! But...there wasn't a whole lot of time for it, lol. They'll get caught up! I'm so glad you liked it!

[stalinglim]

OH BRUCE!!!! I'm sorry. That is all I have. Oh, you beautiful impossible _stubborn_ man...

and oh, Gotham.

[mithen]

Gah, Bruce. He ripped my heart out a bit in this one, he really did. And Gotham! His love for her and the people is so palpable, it almost writes itself...

[thereisafire]

Ugh, hopefully this time LJ lets me comment. Anyway, to sum up the previous comments I attempted to post - I love your Bruce, I love your Clark, I love this fic. This is incredible, thank you for writing it.

[mithen]

Thanks so much! And at least one of your earlier comments got through (curse you, Russian hackers!)--the one mentioning Clark's hand on his forehead, so your comments were not lost forever to the void! :)