Comments | mistr3ssquickly: Full Metal Alchemist, "Empty Nest Epilogue: Family," E/R, F/W, A/D, PG

mistr3ssquickly

Full Metal Alchemist, "Empty Nest Epilogue: Family," E/R, F/W, A/D, PG

Feb 03, 2006 17:03

Epilogue, as promised. Nothing big, just a peek into the future. PG for cuteness.

Empty Nest, in its entirety:
Prologue: Prodigal Sons
Chapter 1: Awakening
Chapter 1.5: A Matter of Pride
Chapter 2: True Test
Chapter 3: Amestris Pie
Chapter 4: Waiting
Chapter 5: Allowance
Chapter 6: Change
Chapter 7: Truce
Chapter 8: Out Alone
Chapter 9: Growing ( Read more... )

fletcher, fma, empty nest, pg, fanfiction, al, russel, danny, winry, ed

Comments 47

sailormac February 4 2006, 02:46:12 UTC

Awwwww . . .

And we go out on a sweet note of fluff. (Although I'd love to see what's *beyond* this . . . Ed and Russell dealing with Fletcher and Winry's children, seeing whether Al and Danny adopt -- but the characters are all *happy* here, and that's the important thing).

Brilliant, brilliant, brillant series. Congratulations, it's FINALLY done!

mistr3ssquickly February 8 2006, 22:13:13 UTC

You know, the first time I read this comment, I broke down and started to cry because of the "Congratulations, it's FINALLY done." Separation anxiety or something, and Ed's just laughing and saying, "See? That's how Russ and I felt, you sadistic bitch!" Hmph.

I'm glad you liked this ending. It's too fluffy for my tastes, but we all know how the boys react to Winry getting pregnant, and you're bunnying me *bad* to do a Al/Danny adoption fic ...

At least it's not really done ^_~ *hugs*

pockygirl February 4 2006, 03:15:00 UTC

This made me smile.
no more reaction than that needed.

simply lovely.

mistr3ssquickly February 8 2006, 22:14:38 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, sweetheart, and I'm glad it made you smile. Really, that's all this epilogue was supposed to do.

ceasefire February 4 2006, 07:19:20 UTC

Awwwwwwwwww~ ♥_♥

That was perfect; especially the little Fletcher/Winry parts... never thought those two would make such an adorable couple XD;; And I've said it before, but I love Al and Danny.

Great end to a great fic.

mistr3ssquickly February 8 2006, 22:16:52 UTC

For some reason, Fletcher and Winry have always just *worked* in my brain. I'm so glad they work for you too! Al and Danny were a bit more of a stretch, but I've come to enjoy writing them almost more than anyone else.

Thank you for reading, babe. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

elegy_19 February 4 2006, 16:04:52 UTC

AWWWW...so cute and sweet. I think the last line is just perfect.

I would give you loads more compliments, but alas, I can't seem to think of any that would do this justice.

By the way, my scanner is being a crackhead, and so I will try to use the library computers to get you that picture.

mistr3ssquickly February 8 2006, 22:18:55 UTC

PICTURE!!! I need a fanart portion on my website ... *adds it to list of things to do*

I'm so glad you liked the ending of this arc, hon. Thank you for reading it ... I know you prefer het. I should work on the Royai now that this is done, eh?

*hugs* You can use my scanner, if you want! It's not evil like library scanners ...

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mistr3ssquickly February 8 2006, 22:20:55 UTC

Please do read the entire arc, hon. I think you'll like it, I really do.

I'm also a huge sucker for marriage. This epilogue was originally written on my husband's and my 5 year dating anniversary, the first year anniversary I've worn a ring on (he proposed right after our 4 year anniversary). The bunny hopped and I obeyed.