Forgive the blabberingpattitooSeptember 9 2015, 18:40:40 UTC
HNNNGGGG WHERE TO BEGIN??? THIS IS GOING TO BE INCOHERENT. FORGIVE ME.
First off, thank you so, so much for this story. I love you. I know you're a pinch hitter because my original author backed out on me so I'm very grateful that you volunteered to write instead. Again, I love you. And no offense to my original author but maybe it was meant to be because I love this story so much!
Honestly, I love all my prompts, as in I wanted to see them all written (heh). But I never realized how much I wanted this particular prompt after I read this story. I'm weak for narratives that involve natural enemies having to fight the tide because of some sort of attraction and you NAILED IT. My heart broke at the reveal that Seungyoon was a cop (even though it was part of the prompt) because I knew the angst was coming and I loved it? YES I'M A MASOCHIST. And I'm so happy/sad/happy that you fed my angst-loving soul LOL. And I don't know why you made that disclaimer that you veered away from the prompt because this was exactly what I wanted. Or maybe
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Forgive the blabbering (2/2)pattitooSeptember 9 2015, 18:41:41 UTC
But to be honest, my heart ached for their love. Even if I felt Seungyoon deserved to lose Mino, I wanted Mino to have a shot at his happiness, now that he's decided to take that leap. The death of Jinwoo, I felt, was used very well in this way. Like it was a turning point for Mino. And I really, really wanted him to have the love Danah had with Jinwoo. It's just Seungyoon UGH SEUNGYOON. You're my bias but UGH. Hahaha. Don't worry, I love that I dislike him -- I felt it was necessary in this story.
Anyway, I just loved it from start to finish. Reading all these minyoon stories, THIS STORY SPECIFICALLY, makes all the writing frustrations worth it. Haha. Thank you dear author. And sorry if I exhausted you with my lengthy ass comment. <3
Oh my god you're such a fanfic writer born for angst. I enjoyed all of your works I'd found here. The way you picked vocabulary the way you built up the plot the climax the ending the smooth flow of the story everything was so natural so real it broke my heart. It's painful yet not over dramatic or irrationally tragic as well as not at all cheesily romantic. Thank you so much and please please write more and more of Minyoon they're my most fav couple ever!!!
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First off, thank you so, so much for this story. I love you. I know you're a pinch hitter because my original author backed out on me so I'm very grateful that you volunteered to write instead. Again, I love you. And no offense to my original author but maybe it was meant to be because I love this story so much!
Honestly, I love all my prompts, as in I wanted to see them all written (heh). But I never realized how much I wanted this particular prompt after I read this story. I'm weak for narratives that involve natural enemies having to fight the tide because of some sort of attraction and you NAILED IT. My heart broke at the reveal that Seungyoon was a cop (even though it was part of the prompt) because I knew the angst was coming and I loved it? YES I'M A MASOCHIST. And I'm so happy/sad/happy that you fed my angst-loving soul LOL. And I don't know why you made that disclaimer that you veered away from the prompt because this was exactly what I wanted. Or maybe ( ... )
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Anyway, I just loved it from start to finish. Reading all these minyoon stories, THIS STORY SPECIFICALLY, makes all the writing frustrations worth it. Haha. Thank you dear author. And sorry if I exhausted you with my lengthy ass comment. <3
- Patti
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