[FANFIC] HIS

Oct 28, 2011 23:18

Title: His
Genre: AU, Drama, Romance
Warning: Homosexuality, Violence
Main Pairing: YunJae (YunHo/JaeJoong)
Summary: His father sold him to a casino owner when he was 10 to settle debts and he'd been working ever since. Weak due to his asthma and barely 16, a stranger take interest in him and bought him after hearing him sing just once. What now?

CHAPTER 5 - SEE )

genre:violence, genre:drama, length:chaptered, fanfic:his, genre:romance, pairing:yunjae

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mimpikita October 28 2011, 16:23:21 UTC
Ah, my first commenter again. Why, thank you. I was fearing that it would be too much, in case the feeling of this fic would disappeared. I knew how this fic should go about, but I was worried my readers would get lost. But glad it didn't. Yes, of course YunHo is different with JaeJoong. Not really 360% but definitely way different. Thank you for your love. I hope my muse won't let you down. Welcome.
Thank you for reading and commenting.

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mimpikita October 28 2011, 17:06:12 UTC
It's okay, it's an honest mistake really. He'd changed a lot due to JaeJoong's existence in his life. Like YooChun said, he'd had his heart back but of course, he's still YunHo the scary Jung's leader so it's not possible for him to change fully.

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yooyunaa October 28 2011, 16:20:48 UTC
so short but still sweet...
heheh... pls keep updating k... hwaiting~~~

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mimpikita October 28 2011, 16:29:52 UTC
Well, I did update daily. So I don't think I can increase the length much. Sorry. And for me, this fic isn't for a lengthy writng. It'll lose the feeling I wish to convey. But glad you find it sweet.
I will, depending on what my muse say of course. Hwaiting.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
P.S.: I am personally very happy to see your comment. It baffles me to see that I have more than a hundred readers for each chapter but only so few commented. And you'd commented more than once too. Thank you.

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awshin October 28 2011, 16:40:47 UTC
Maybe Jaejoong can be a little more expressive with his feelings through words? =/ I don't know. Haha!

Thank you for the update!

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mimpikita October 28 2011, 16:53:07 UTC
Well, he can. But he'd been 'conditioned' not to. Even though he can find back his innocence, what he'd become as a young adult isn't reversible. You can see that he's always fighting to understand thing and express himself, as if he's still unsure.
Welcome.
Thank you for reading and commenting. It meant a lot to me to still see you here.

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cc9095 October 28 2011, 16:48:52 UTC
You're making me cry lol

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mimpikita October 28 2011, 16:54:03 UTC
Now, now. Don't cry. Why are you crying anyway?
Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad to see you.

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cc9095 October 28 2011, 17:07:36 UTC
I'm crying because I'm so happy Yunho is getting closer to lovely Jaejoong)))))))

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mimpikita October 28 2011, 17:20:51 UTC
Ah, I see. Glad you're happy with their development.

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nissy_angel October 28 2011, 17:26:59 UTC
Tis too cute XD

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mimpikita October 29 2011, 03:40:25 UTC
Glad you think so.
Thank you for reading and commenting.

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