A New Adventure in Our Secret Affair (Jack/Liz)

[michellek]

Title: A New Adventure in Our Secret Affair
For: The Porn Battle!
Prompt: 30 Rock, Jack/Liz, desk
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,140
Summary: "Office sex had never appealed to her..."

Disclaimer: This doesn't belong to me.

Comments

DUDE.

[obsession_inc]

I was actually having a discussion with someone on the topic of Jack/Liz sex and whether or not it could actually be pulled off without veering either too far to the comic side (and losing the sexy) or too far to the sexy side (and losing the funny). I had deep doubts. You have SOLVED THOSE DOUBTS. I am agog and incredibly impressed. ROCK THE RIGHTEOUS HELL ON.

Re: DUDE.

[michellek]

!!! Thank you muchly. I am glad to assuage such doubts, because I want no one to doubt the greatness of Jack/Liz smut. Also because such feedback makes me feel awesome. Thank you again!

[thiswaltz]

Me = Speechless (totally in a good way)

you are so good at these two it's not even fair. I love you Liz characterazation in this - just enough awkward to make it believable.

Perfect balance of hot and sweet. used to be I Shipped Jack/Liz in a tame, 'just like on the show but two steps farther' kinda way. Now? I'm jumping on the 'they should have sex or at least make out' bandwagon and I blame you for that ;-)

[michellek]

Hee, thank you.

Yay, I'm blamed for a good thing. Because wanting Jack and Liz to have sex is a good thing. True story!

[csiangel]

I love this! Liz completely and utterly flustered, and with incoherent thoughts is brilliant! Very hot!

[michellek]

Thank you. :)

[bohemea]

I can't wait to watch season 2 and read your stories at the same time, then fantasy and reality can mix like it's supposed to! You write their dialogue so well, that plus the sexin makes for a super time.

[michellek]

Hee, thank you. :)

[allthingsholy]

I love that even while having sex (and having GOOD sex), Liz is still a total spaz.

[michellek]

Hee. I love that, too.