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michellek

A New Adventure in Our Secret Affair (Jack/Liz)

Jul 14, 2007 16:49

Title: A New Adventure in Our Secret Affair
For: The Porn Battle!
Prompt: 30 Rock, Jack/Liz, desk
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,140
Summary: "Office sex had never appealed to her..."

Disclaimer: This doesn't belong to me.

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jack/liz, 30 rock

Comments 26

jesshelga July 14 2007, 21:50:15 UTC

At the risk of sounding dorky, awesome. Such a perfect combo of sexy pr0n and just plain-old-nerd-Liz.

She covers his mouth. "Please don't be mentor guy right now. Just be guy who has sex with me guy."

After she pulls her hand away, he says, "I was being guy who has sex with you guy. I usually am, to be quite frank."

Then he's kissing her, and she's still not sure what to do next. But, you know. She's okay with that.

When the end is almost as awesome as the dirty middle, you know you've created a winner!

michellek July 23 2007, 01:08:17 UTC

Hee. Thank you!

dollsome July 14 2007, 23:32:58 UTC

"Lemon--"

"Dude," she says. "Don't call me Lemon while you're touching my boobs."

"And I will ask that you extend a similar courtesy to me and not call me 'dude.'"

So, the thing is, I think you might actually win everything in life.

michellek July 23 2007, 01:08:49 UTC

!!! Thank you. :)

regalish July 15 2007, 00:28:01 UTC

OMG HOTTTTTTTT. Seriously, that was just the hottest ever, AND it made me laugh out loud in certain spots, because that is the awesomeness of the way you write Liz's thoughts. Here is my absolute favorite:

This is all Jack's fault. Him and his ability to make her enjoy sex. Stupid jerk.

BWAHAHAHA. I think the 'stupid jerk' part makes the whole thing completely hilarious -- I could hear it so perfectly in her voice.

Well, this porn battle of yours better include lots more Jack/Liz, because this was unbelievably hot!!

michellek July 23 2007, 04:15:34 UTC

Hee, thank you! Sadly, I didn't get to write any more Jack/Liz for the battle o'porn, but I'm sure I'll write more in the future. Because I love Jack/Liz, and I love porn. ;)

firthgal July 15 2007, 00:31:03 UTC

OH GOD!!! My heart is racing, I'm all tingly, and I have such a huge smile on my face! This was so incredibly awesome and amazing and perfect. It had just the right mixture of porn and the Jack/Liz dynamic! I adored the dialogue at the end, so sweet in a Jack/Liz kind of way. Excellent writing!

michellek July 23 2007, 04:16:10 UTC

Thank you so much. :) I'm glad you liked it.

musical_junkie July 15 2007, 03:32:42 UTC

That was freaking awesome.

"Dude," she says. "Don't call me Lemon while you're touching my boobs."
"And I will ask that you extend a similar courtesy to me and not call me 'dude.'"

Win!

michellek July 23 2007, 04:16:33 UTC

:) Thank you!