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michellek

A New Adventure in Our Secret Affair (Jack/Liz)

Jul 14, 2007 16:49

Title: A New Adventure in Our Secret Affair
For: The Porn Battle!
Prompt: 30 Rock, Jack/Liz, desk
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1,140
Summary: "Office sex had never appealed to her..."

Disclaimer: This doesn't belong to me.

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jack/liz, 30 rock

Comments 26

csi_miamie126 July 16 2007, 01:39:00 UTC

Let me tell you that I almost squealed when I saw the rating. You ARE made of win. Haha.

Second, I love your characterizations. Even if this is an NC-17 fic. It's not like the usual, "whoa, too many details on the kinky stuff" fic. I loved how you focused on Liz "thoughts". There is the balance of the kink and the character.

And of course,

"Lemon--"

"Dude," she says. "Don't call me Lemon while you're touching my boobs."

"And I will ask that you extend a similar courtesy to me and not call me 'dude.'"

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"See," he says. "It's not so bad to try something new--"

She covers his mouth. "Please don't be mentor guy right now. Just be guy who has sex with me guy."

After she pulls her hand away, he says, "I was being guy who has sex with you guy. I usually am, to be quite frank."

Then he's kissing her, and she's still not sure what to do next. But, you know. She's okay with that.You have PWNED me with these. Allow me to take this fic back to middle school and get it printed ( ... )

michellek July 23 2007, 04:30:12 UTC

Allow me to take this fic back to middle school and get it printed.

LOL, go ahead.

I should've probably mentioned that this fic slightly distracted me from the fact that the unit I was using has a nasty trojan and that it momentarilly pushed my annoyance over "WinSoftAntiVirus". I owe you one.

Glad to be of service. :)

Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you dug it.

gravi_girl123 July 20 2007, 01:38:31 UTC

This was the first fic I actually read where they actually *do it* usually if it's romance there's just some mild jealousy and flirting. I loved this. I tend to click on anything you write and know it's going to be good, though. Your 30 Rock and Scrubs fic had me hooked.

michellek July 23 2007, 04:31:10 UTC

*beams* Thank you, thank you.

roga May 26 2008, 19:38:55 UTC

After she pulls her hand away, he says, "I was being guy who has sex with you guy. I usually am, to be quite frank."

I am so incredibly in love with that line. ♥.

michellek May 29 2008, 05:01:45 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you are. :)