Comments | mhalachaiswords: Physics of the Spin IV: The Precise Point Of Impact (Stargate/Gilmore Girls) PG

mhalachaiswords

Physics of the Spin IV: The Precise Point Of Impact (Stargate/Gilmore Girls) PG

Dec 28, 2007 19:44

Okay, I admit it. It's the next epic.

Physics of the Spin: The Precise Point Of Impact
A Stargate/Gilmore Girls crossover
Part Four in the Physics Of the Spin series
by mhalachaiswords

Summary: There's a method to the madness of shattering glass, and Rory needs to figure out what the hell she's going to do with the shards of her life.
Disclaimer: None of these ( Read more... )

story: physics of the spin, fic: stargate atlantis, fic: stargate sg1, fic: gilmore girls

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strangevisitor7 December 29 2007, 12:25:25 UTC

You have crawled inside Rory's head and it is amazing. i was never fond of her but you are making me like her. All the Gilmore voices are perfect and the Friday dinner scene felt lifted right out of an episode.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

mhalachaiswords December 29 2007, 20:00:47 UTC

I didn't like Rory much in the later seasons of Gilmore Girls - her character actually seemed to devolve as the years passed. Season 1 Rory seemed more mature than season 6 Rory. Anyway, I wanted to change that.

And the dinner scene was the easiest to write :D I love the Gilmore grandparents :)

More soon!

ffutures December 29 2007, 17:31:42 UTC

Just saw this recced and I'm enjoying it a lot, hope you won't mind me friending you so I don't miss the rest of it.

mhalachaiswords December 29 2007, 20:03:15 UTC

Not at all! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :D

rosy_the_cat December 29 2007, 21:47:31 UTC

I was so happy-fied by this chapter that I had to fight the urge to wake up the easily-irritated cat with a hug and a Squee! I'm so very, very glad that the plot-bunnies have been productive for you.

-- Rosy

mhalachaiswords December 30 2007, 00:54:36 UTC

Yay! Glad you liked it, and hope the cat wasn't too annoyed if you woke it up :D

rosy_the_cat December 30 2007, 09:29:38 UTC

Eh, I mannaged to keep myself in control enough to avoid the Claws of Doom.

-- Rosy

lilyoftheval5 December 29 2007, 22:03:38 UTC

I hated this chapter. Character exploration or not.
Please write the next one....

mhalachaiswords December 30 2007, 00:27:34 UTC

I'm sorry you felt that way. If I may ask, what about the chapter don't you like?

*sighs* lilyoftheval5 December 30 2007, 20:24:59 UTC

I do not like the chapter's function and passivity. Do not get me wrong, please, the chapter is good and fascinating, and necessary. But I'm hungry for more action, dialog, Rory meeting people ( ... )

houses7177 December 29 2007, 23:21:42 UTC

Beautiful imagery of shattered glass, the girl with glass hands. There is something alive about this part, like she's waking up to what she could be and it really resonates. Brava!

mhalachaiswords December 30 2007, 00:52:34 UTC

Thank you. Rory's essentially at rock bottom at the start of this one - she has no idea where to look for Rodney, no clue as to how to fight her way out of the situation she's created for herself, and not even sure if she's totally sane.

Then Jack came and gave her a hand, and she's using it to pull herself up.

The fragility she's experiencing is only the beginning of her journey [/announcer voice]

Glad you liked it!

Remind me - have you seen any Gilmore Girls?

houses7177 December 30 2007, 18:16:11 UTC

I watched the first two seasons and enjoyed it, but last Xmas I tuned in with my inlaws and had no idea who those people were or what they were doing. It seemed...different.

mhalachaiswords December 30 2007, 18:33:01 UTC

I know what you mean about the characters not being the same over time. I found Rory's change (or devolution) to be the most annoying. There was a change in writers, but even before that, the show certainly did shift.

But that is a favoured rant of mine, and in the end I did what I do best (?) - fix it with fanfic.