... What is this brilliance mine eyes are seeing? Oh God, they would be exactly like this. Passive aggressive snark meets kick-you-in-the-face snark. They would simultaneously make the best and worst team ever.
No seriously, I didn't have time to stream-of-conscious review this the first time around, but I was fair cackling throughout the whole thing while occasionally being punched by ~feelings~ Oh Allen, you are such a special kid. And Ed continues to be a dick, I love it. Is his innocence like Al's? I like how you made Al's Innocence though. At least he still has feeling on his face?!
The Science people would like Ed. They're both scientifically batshit and like blowing stuff up. Sob.
They really would be the best and worst team ever. XD I like to think they even got the better of Cross every once in a while, just from sheer weight of numbers.
I figured Ed's Innocence would be very much like automail--less exciting than Al's, more along the lines of Allen's. Someone pointed out up above that this probably makes Winry God, and since she would be a far, far better god than the current DGM god, I SUPPORT.
The Science people and Ed would be the most glorious disaster waiting to happen, YAY.
Ed and Allen arguing like a pair of kids about whether or not he's going to kill Allen is absolutely hilarious. Genius, once again, and so many neat parallels - Komui is just like Hughes, God. 8D
this is fantastic!! SO fantastic!!! ^^ usually I don't like crossovers, but this one worked out really well :D. all the characterisation was done perfectly, and Ed & Al managed to seamlessly fit in ^^. Just a shame that roy wouldnt go in there :P. Very well done.
oh my GOD. *___________* you did it again alskdjflakf WHY ISN'T THIS CANON. OMG. ED AND AL AND ALLEN. OH MY GOD YOUR ALLEN IS JUST THE BEST. THE BEST ALLEN BECAUSE IT'S SO TRUE TO CANON LKDJFSKJLAS AND EEEEEE THE THREE CROSS-ETEERS, DIES. AND KANDA!!!! ED WITH KANDA!!! DYING. I HAVE NO WORDS FOR HOW BRILLIANT THIS WAS AKDJF;ALSFJ PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING. <3333333
omg, The Three Crosseteers, *DIEZ* XD And Kanda, who doubtless doesn't think he's done anything to deserve this even though he kind of has.
Speaking of which, AH HA HA, this was actually a really terrible thing to do to Cross...a thought which cheered me up all through the writing of this. :D :D :D
I WANT TO BASK IN THIS FIC FOREVER. Just...the three of them together, oh my God, and then add Cross. EFFING GLORIOUS.
I'd list the things that are perfect, but that's everything. Ed and the science department's mutual love--yeah, that would happen. Komui and Hughes really are like, the same fucking person, with the crazy goofiness and then the sudden super intense badassery. Allen's room! Like Ed is one to critique decor, right? Greatest ever. I love Ed's thoughts on the Bookmen (and I lovelovelove your Lavi), and Ed liking Lenalee and her bringing them to food without question and actually all of the relationships here, and just basically everyone in the Order being as fucking batshit insane as they really are. Also, holy shit, Kanda's Entrance! I literally sat here crying for about five minutes before I could even continue
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It's not often that I feel bad for Cross, but the thought of how those training years must've gone...yeah. No one deserves that. XD
I'm so glad you enjoyed all the crossover fun times! And it's true that it takes a lot of nerve for Ed to criticize Allen's taste in decor...but one thing Ed definitely has is nerve. XD (lololol, Kanda's Entrances! I swear he has some drama switch that has never been turned off. OH, KANDA.)
Ed and Allen are actually more classically catty siblings than Ed and Al, who get along surprisingly well. WHICH, HILARIOUS. *snuggles them*
Mustang's team ♥. Maybe I'll work up the energy to do another fic mainly about them. I'm sure they're friends with Komui and Zhu and Fo and Cross and EVERYONE COOL.
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No seriously, I didn't have time to stream-of-conscious review this the first time around, but I was fair cackling throughout the whole thing while occasionally being punched by ~feelings~ Oh Allen, you are such a special kid. And Ed continues to be a dick, I love it. Is his innocence like Al's? I like how you made Al's Innocence though. At least he still has feeling on his face?!
The Science people would like Ed. They're both scientifically batshit and like blowing stuff up. Sob.
Ilu. ♥
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I figured Ed's Innocence would be very much like automail--less exciting than Al's, more along the lines of Allen's. Someone pointed out up above that this probably makes Winry God, and since she would be a far, far better god than the current DGM god, I SUPPORT.
The Science people and Ed would be the most glorious disaster waiting to happen, YAY.
ilu too, thank you for the comment! ♥
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Wait, DGM got a legit God, when did they get that? And wow, Winry's gonna hit Ed for saying he hates her, hahah.
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But yeah, if Winry were God, many wrenches would be thrown at Ed's face. XD
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This was very rewarding to write, because the more you think about it, the more sidelong parallels there are. GOOD TIMES.
Thank you so much for the comment! :D
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Maybe Roy & gang will get their own story in this verse someday? That could be fun to write. XD
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Speaking of which, AH HA HA, this was actually a really terrible thing to do to Cross...a thought which cheered me up all through the writing of this. :D :D :D
Thank you so much for the comment! ♥
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I'd list the things that are perfect, but that's everything. Ed and the science department's mutual love--yeah, that would happen. Komui and Hughes really are like, the same fucking person, with the crazy goofiness and then the sudden super intense badassery. Allen's room! Like Ed is one to critique decor, right? Greatest ever. I love Ed's thoughts on the Bookmen (and I lovelovelove your Lavi), and Ed liking Lenalee and her bringing them to food without question and actually all of the relationships here, and just basically everyone in the Order being as fucking batshit insane as they really are. Also, holy shit, Kanda's Entrance! I literally sat here crying for about five minutes before I could even continue ( ... )
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I'm so glad you enjoyed all the crossover fun times! And it's true that it takes a lot of nerve for Ed to criticize Allen's taste in decor...but one thing Ed definitely has is nerve. XD (lololol, Kanda's Entrances! I swear he has some drama switch that has never been turned off. OH, KANDA.)
Ed and Allen are actually more classically catty siblings than Ed and Al, who get along surprisingly well. WHICH, HILARIOUS. *snuggles them*
Mustang's team ♥. Maybe I'll work up the energy to do another fic mainly about them. I'm sure they're friends with Komui and Zhu and Fo and Cross and EVERYONE COOL.
Thank you so much for the happy comment! ^_^
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