I WANT TO BASK IN THIS FIC FOREVER. Just...the three of them together, oh my God, and then add Cross. EFFING GLORIOUS.
I'd list the things that are perfect, but that's everything. Ed and the science department's mutual love--yeah, that would happen. Komui and Hughes really are like, the same fucking person, with the crazy goofiness and then the sudden super intense badassery. Allen's room! Like Ed is one to critique decor, right? Greatest ever. I love Ed's thoughts on the Bookmen (and I lovelovelove your Lavi), and Ed liking Lenalee and her bringing them to food without question and actually all of the relationships here, and just basically everyone in the Order being as fucking batshit insane as they really are. Also, holy shit, Kanda's Entrance! I literally sat here crying for about five minutes before I could even continue.
Jesus, idek, this is fucking flawless. I love how you handled the 14th, and how it's still the big issue and Ed treats it accordingly, letting Allen do whatever he needs to. I love that Ed and Allen actually like each other, in their own messed up ways, even though they want to strangle each other every second of their lives. I'm super fucking intrigued about their Innocence (and how they don't want it--they're such fucking Elrics), and I love the throwbacks to all of their problems being about resurrecting dead people. I've wondered idly about what would've happened if the Earl was around when shit went down in the FMA!verse, but never what Ed and Al would do in DGM!verse; I imagine it'd very similar to what you have here. Everything just makes so much sense, and you've translated the elements really, really well. (Of course Mustang's team is planning to overthrow everything--that's what they're best at).
It's not often that I feel bad for Cross, but the thought of how those training years must've gone...yeah. No one deserves that. XD
I'm so glad you enjoyed all the crossover fun times! And it's true that it takes a lot of nerve for Ed to criticize Allen's taste in decor...but one thing Ed definitely has is nerve. XD (lololol, Kanda's Entrances! I swear he has some drama switch that has never been turned off. OH, KANDA.)
Ed and Allen are actually more classically catty siblings than Ed and Al, who get along surprisingly well. WHICH, HILARIOUS. *snuggles them*
Mustang's team ♥. Maybe I'll work up the energy to do another fic mainly about them. I'm sure they're friends with Komui and Zhu and Fo and Cross and EVERYONE COOL.
I'd list the things that are perfect, but that's everything. Ed and the science department's mutual love--yeah, that would happen. Komui and Hughes really are like, the same fucking person, with the crazy goofiness and then the sudden super intense badassery. Allen's room! Like Ed is one to critique decor, right? Greatest ever. I love Ed's thoughts on the Bookmen (and I lovelovelove your Lavi), and Ed liking Lenalee and her bringing them to food without question and actually all of the relationships here, and just basically everyone in the Order being as fucking batshit insane as they really are. Also, holy shit, Kanda's Entrance! I literally sat here crying for about five minutes before I could even continue.
Jesus, idek, this is fucking flawless. I love how you handled the 14th, and how it's still the big issue and Ed treats it accordingly, letting Allen do whatever he needs to. I love that Ed and Allen actually like each other, in their own messed up ways, even though they want to strangle each other every second of their lives. I'm super fucking intrigued about their Innocence (and how they don't want it--they're such fucking Elrics), and I love the throwbacks to all of their problems being about resurrecting dead people. I've wondered idly about what would've happened if the Earl was around when shit went down in the FMA!verse, but never what Ed and Al would do in DGM!verse; I imagine it'd very similar to what you have here. Everything just makes so much sense, and you've translated the elements really, really well. (Of course Mustang's team is planning to overthrow everything--that's what they're best at).
UGH, I CAN'T EVEN.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed all the crossover fun times! And it's true that it takes a lot of nerve for Ed to criticize Allen's taste in decor...but one thing Ed definitely has is nerve. XD (lololol, Kanda's Entrances! I swear he has some drama switch that has never been turned off. OH, KANDA.)
Ed and Allen are actually more classically catty siblings than Ed and Al, who get along surprisingly well. WHICH, HILARIOUS. *snuggles them*
Mustang's team ♥. Maybe I'll work up the energy to do another fic mainly about them. I'm sure they're friends with Komui and Zhu and Fo and Cross and EVERYONE COOL.
Thank you so much for the happy comment! ^_^
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