Ed, you are a genius. And great and wonderful and perfect and AUGH. Ed and Al and Allen and Kanda and Lavi and Lenalee give me so many feelings here! Ed's not-a-deal with Kanda really is just brilliant, as well as his way of getting around Allen's lying lies by actually telling Kanda (some of) the truth. And ooh, that bit when he was in the lab! Scientists are my favorite, especially the ones who tend to make things go boom. I love how you integrated all the FMA bits in with the DGM fandom, from Ed's and Al's Innocence to their resurrection attempt to Hughes. My absolute favorite bits are the Allen/Al/Ed conversations, though. SO GREAT.
(Also if Ed's arm and leg are Innocence, does this mean that Winry is God?)
That was magnificent. I continue to enjoy the hell out of your characterization, so biting and full of snark, and crazyallen and sortofnotstable ed, and al who outmanipulates them both without trying just by being al. They really works so nicely as additions to the glorious insanity of the exorcists.
Like with pretty much everything else you've written, I found myself reading each and every line with a manic glee and often a delighted cackle that made this whole thing pretty much the best, most enjoyable read I've had in, I don't even know, months. Please never stop writing. And now I shall indulge in a nice, relieving bit of keysmash. ohgodoifhaedyfethisis the best thing ever oh Ed, Ed why you so awesome Allen you crazy, loveable bastard and oh my god, and Cross, CROOOSSS HAHAHAHAHA trauma-ridden apprentices only, pffft and oh god, Allen's the third sibling isn't he and Kandaand the deal and Ed and the three of them aaaah so amazing together I love them I love this I love each and every scene and this is alfnaihnvcairfuvhsnelai,vfsklj,vihmgsunaksjdnaliwuf
Thank you very much! I...don't know if there will be more? It is kind of tempting to catch up with Roy's gang and see how they know Cross, because I have no doubt that they're all bffs on the sly...
Wheee! I squeed when I saw this come up on the FMA ljs because I thought it was a continuation of your last FMA/DGM cross and I was like 'YAY!' but it wasn't which was okay BECAUSE IT WAS BETTER!!!
How do you write such good dialogue, especially when writing dialogue from the POV of characters who are not quite sane or stable. The voices just pop off the page and come to life so well I could hear them in my head snarking at each other. It was awesome.
I also like how you chose to meld the two universes together. I like the subtle hints about how Ed and Al ended up with Cross, and I caught hints that my brain saw as nods towards linking the humunculi with either the Noah or Akuma. Interesting. I can even forgive the lack of the Mustang group, because I can see they weren't needed (I do wonder how they are planning their rebellion, though).
Yeah, I really need to finish writing the prequel for that other crossover. It's just embarrassing now, it's been so long. *hides* But I'm glad you liked this one!
How do you write such good dialogue, especially when writing dialogue from the POV of characters who are not quite sane or stable. I could answer that question, but it would be incriminating. XD
I'm glad you liked the melding! Yeah, I was going for a homunculi/Noah parallel, seeing as the homunculi are deadly sins and the Noah are...well, not sins, but character traits, I guess. Some of them are sins. And maybe someday I'll write about what Roy & gang are up to. I'm kind of curious about them, too.
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(Also if Ed's arm and leg are Innocence, does this mean that Winry is God?)
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The SCIENCE DEPARTMENT. They are my favorites a lot of the time, just. ♥♥♥
Also if Ed's arm and leg are Innocence, does this mean that Winry is God?
YES. YES, I BELIEVE SO. I was sort of picturing her being Ed and Al's answer to Reever and the Science Department, but this is EVEN BETTER. :D :D :D
I'm happy you liked this! Crossovers are kind of stressful. ^_^
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Also, Al and Allen have a lot more in common than I'd ever realized. It's a little scary. XD
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CROSS. For Sir Not Appearing in This Fic, I had way, way too much fun with him. Because he and Ed...man, it would be like Ed and Roy ONLY WORSE.
Allen is totally the third sibling. Middle child. :D :D :D
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How do you write such good dialogue, especially when writing dialogue from the POV of characters who are not quite sane or stable. The voices just pop off the page and come to life so well I could hear them in my head snarking at each other. It was awesome.
I also like how you chose to meld the two universes together. I like the subtle hints about how Ed and Al ended up with Cross, and I caught hints that my brain saw as nods towards linking the humunculi with either the Noah or Akuma. Interesting. I can even forgive the lack of the Mustang group, because I can see they weren't needed (I do wonder how they are planning their rebellion, though).
Thanks for sharing this with us.
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How do you write such good dialogue, especially when writing dialogue from the POV of characters who are not quite sane or stable. I could answer that question, but it would be incriminating. XD
I'm glad you liked the melding! Yeah, I was going for a homunculi/Noah parallel, seeing as the homunculi are deadly sins and the Noah are...well, not sins, but character traits, I guess. Some of them are sins. And maybe someday I'll write about what Roy & gang are up to. I'm kind of curious about them, too.
Thanks for the comment! ^_^
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