Supernatural fic: Highway Patrol

[metamorphagi]

Title: Highway Patrol
Fandom(s): Supernatural
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 728
Summary: On December 8, 1991, John Winchester kills his two sons in the backseat of the Impala.  Their spirits never leave the car.
Author’s Notes: Response to this prompt.

Comments

[surevesta]

Oh god.... I'm actually wondering why John did that... did Dean try to run away or something?

Great job *shudders* I loved how you used the police officers.

[metamorphagi]

I have absolutely no idea. I just took the prompt and ran with it; there wasn't a hell of a lot of thought behind it, to be honest. Except that, evidently, I was feeling really creepy the night I wrote this.

But thank you!

[metamorphagi]

Since that's what I was going for, I shall take this as a compliment!

[pathsforme]

That was a creepy story indeed. For the life of me, I wonder what will happen when John remembers and knows the truth and if John will eventually end up possessing the Impala too.

Great job.

[metamorphagi]

Thanks. That would be an interesting story; I'd be much inclined to write it at some point, but considering I have about fifty billion going on right now, I should probably put it on a list of awesome ideas. Because John possessing the Impala = amazingly creepy.

[garnet_words]

*shivers* That last line... brrr. I was expecting something like, they got in a car accident or something and were stuck with the car, and John is just going along with it or else he'll go crazy (which, it kinda sounds like that's what you were going for anyway) So yeah, that line caught me by surprise and sent a shiver down my spine... really nicely done.

[metamorphagi]

Thank you so much!

[a_phoenixdragon]

Gahhhh...oh GODS, John finally snapped!! Oh shit!!

*Sobs*

I...

*Sobs harder*

*Saves*

Thank you...

*HUGS*

[metamorphagi]

='(

Sorry!

But thank you very much.