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a tremulous delight

Mar 03, 2010 21:42

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Supernatural kijikun March 6 2010, 02:15:22 UTC

On December 8, 1991 John Winchester kills his two sons in the backseat of the Impala. Their spirits never leave the car.

Re: Supernatural janissa11 March 6 2010, 02:40:31 UTC

This prompt has already put a lump in my throat. ::sniffles::

Re: Supernatural riama82 March 6 2010, 19:18:46 UTC

Wow... This gives me goosebumps *shudders*
If anyone writes this prompt, I'll make the fanart.
I love drawing weechesters, and ghost!weechesters beat that! What the hell... I'll do the fanart anyway! But I warn you, it may take me a while ;-)

Re: Supernatural annj_g80 March 7 2010, 08:15:08 UTC

I'm so going to write this!

On December 8th (1/3) annj_g80 March 7 2010, 10:18:54 UTC

Not mine and unbeta'd. The usual then ( ... )

Re: SPN, On December 8th (1/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG annj_g80 March 7 2010, 16:01:43 UTC

(Reposted to make it as correct as requested ( ... )

SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG annj_g80 March 7 2010, 16:03:14 UTC

But his fingers were completely covered now, the warm liquid trickling down his wrist and onto his trousers. Like a fountain with its center on his own hand. It bubbled and spluttered. The stench made him gag with revulsion. The blood crawled over his skin like a living being. It spread over the seats and the dashboard and it ran down the windows in rivulets first, then waterfalls made of black blood. Tom wanted to scream, wanted out. Out. Out. Out. Wanted to rip of his skin covered in that substance. Wanted to run. His mind screaming in shocked denial. This wasn't happening ( ... )

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG demonbloodadict March 7 2010, 21:11:12 UTC

That is amazing. And so haunting. I really like how Tom freaks and makes the realization. The imagery you paint is fantastic. Write on!

post script:
Is it alright if I use this prompt to?

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG annj_g80 March 7 2010, 21:37:36 UTC

Thanks for the reply and knock yourself out with the prompt. I'm interested in what you make out of it :-)

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG demonbloodadict March 7 2010, 21:38:29 UTC

I'll keep you posted. This prompt is just so bittersweet... I'm excited to play with it. :)

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG spiderine March 7 2010, 23:09:01 UTC

That was stunning. Beautiful!

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG annj_g80 March 9 2010, 07:00:04 UTC

Thank you :-) Glad you liked it.

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG kijikun March 7 2010, 23:38:09 UTC

*shivers* Very creepy and more than a little heartbreaking. At least Tom's decent enough to leave the car be.

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG annj_g80 March 9 2010, 07:01:41 UTC

Yeah, I thought hard about what to do with the car in the end. Leaving it be kinda was the only thing to do.

And thanks for the review :-) It's appreciated much.

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG smilla02 March 16 2010, 08:51:32 UTC

I adore this story. You made me cry. Also, Tom is a good guy. I loved that he decided to keep the car and give it (and the boys) rest.

Re: SPN, On December 8th (3/3), Sam, Dean, OC - PG annj_g80 March 18 2010, 07:10:04 UTC

Yeah, leaving it be seemed like the only good thing to do.

And Thanks a alot for the feedback.

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