Terrified!Ron at the beginging was really priceless - I could just imagine the look of horror on his face. I really liked the nod to Ron and Remus having an Arthur-esque fascination with Muggle artifacts, too.
Terrifed!Ron was fun to write, but even more was EvilSister!Ginny. I got the idea when my own sister was just evil to my brother, who just met his girlfriend's parents.
Can't you see Ron over the dinner table, "Dad, I got to use a mobile phone today! And Remus was playing with the wireless one!"
From reading this, I'd have thought you were an old hand at R/Hr! This fic was just so much fun -- so many great lines and great interactions. And I liked getting to take a look at the Grangers.
Thought you did a good job with the characters and interaction in this, especially as I, too (and I'm whispering this, so as not to get disowned;)), wouldn't be that thrilled at having to write Ron and Hermione together.
Liked how Ron was terrified, Ginny was enjoying stirring, and Tonks seemed to be the most relaxed person around, lol. It was great fun watching them all be spellbound by the mobile phone (I was half hoping someone would suggest watching a DVD to pass the time;)), and everyone being impressed by Auror Tonks of Scotland Yard's wizarding equivalent was inspired. As was the final question about werewolves; I really think you should have let Mrs Granger voice that one, just so I could hear Tonks or Remus answer!
I have NO IDEA why I can't write RHr...HG is fine, RT obviously...but RHr nope! I can write HRH, but not RHr. It's very odd...
If I was Ginny I'd SO be torturing Ron, and if I was Ron, I'd SO be terrified!
I wanted to continue with the facination with the Muggle devices, but 2800 words is a novel for me!
As for the Auror/Scotland Yard comaparison I can't take credit for that. I thought more along the line of MI5 or 6, but Godricgal told me they'd be more Scotland Yard. Thanks, K! =D
I SO wanted to go there with Mrs Ganger...but wasn't sure if Remus would tell her he was a werewolf (or allude to it). I think Hermione's parents are fearing sending their daughter off at wartime, so going off with a werewolf...Just IMAGINE Tonks' response to her!!
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I'm glad Ron and Hermione came out all right. They worried me!
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Terrifed!Ron was fun to write, but even more was EvilSister!Ginny. I got the idea when my own sister was just evil to my brother, who just met his girlfriend's parents.
Can't you see Ron over the dinner table, "Dad, I got to use a mobile phone today! And Remus was playing with the wireless one!"
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I quiet enjoyed writing that part!
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Naw...I don't do R/Hr, but most of my flist IS R/Hr'ers, so I drew from them! Trust me, there was ALOT of editing done!
I enjoyed writing the Grangers though =D
Glad you enjoyed!
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Liked how Ron was terrified, Ginny was enjoying stirring, and Tonks seemed to be the most relaxed person around, lol. It was great fun watching them all be spellbound by the mobile phone (I was half hoping someone would suggest watching a DVD to pass the time;)), and everyone being impressed by Auror Tonks of Scotland Yard's wizarding equivalent was inspired. As was the final question about werewolves; I really think you should have let Mrs Granger voice that one, just so I could hear Tonks or Remus answer!
Really lively, fun read. :)
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I have NO IDEA why I can't write RHr...HG is fine, RT obviously...but RHr nope! I can write HRH, but not RHr. It's very odd...
If I was Ginny I'd SO be torturing Ron, and if I was Ron, I'd SO be terrified!
I wanted to continue with the facination with the Muggle devices, but 2800 words is a novel for me!
As for the Auror/Scotland Yard comaparison I can't take credit for that. I thought more along the line of MI5 or 6, but Godricgal told me they'd be more Scotland Yard. Thanks, K! =D
I SO wanted to go there with Mrs Ganger...but wasn't sure if Remus would tell her he was a werewolf (or allude to it). I think Hermione's parents are fearing sending their daughter off at wartime, so going off with a werewolf...Just IMAGINE Tonks' response to her!!
Glad you enjoyed!!
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