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Feb 19, 2007 21:31

Title: The Fellyphone
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gijane7702, general, lovers' moon fic jumble

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jncar February 22 2007, 03:55:24 UTC
Very cute. I liked Remus and Ron playing with the telephones. :)

And all the "getting to know the Muggles" banter was fun.

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gijane7702 February 22 2007, 04:01:56 UTC
Thanks for reading!

Can't you see the 'guilty' look on Remus' face as he's busted by Ron =D

Glad you enjoyed!

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lessthangreat February 22 2007, 18:43:04 UTC
Ah! For all the complaining and dreading you did on your personal LJ, this is WONDERFUL! I love everything about it, seriously. :-)

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gijane7702 February 22 2007, 21:00:40 UTC
Thanks for reading, J.

Yeah, yeah, I bitched and complained about it a lot, but I got a lot of help from some RHr experts by it!! How else was I to finish the damned thing!!

Glad you enjoyed it.

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isis_uf February 22 2007, 20:54:59 UTC
Very, very cute. I particularly enjoyed the way Mrs. Granger got ridiculously excited about the idea of faeries being real. Nice job!

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gijane7702 February 22 2007, 21:02:40 UTC
Thanks for reading, J (*LOL*)

I wanted to go in depth about the fairies ('No, Mum, they're not at all like Tinkerbell') but didnt want to get carried away. I decided 2800 words is perfect for a oneshot =)

Glad you enjoyed!

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mrstater February 23 2007, 00:22:34 UTC
Oh, I do like when fics show the Wizards being fascinated by the Muggle world. This reminds me of the Advance Guard scene where the Order members are all in awe of the Dursleys' kitchen. Remus is so cute playing with the mobile.

And you captured bickering!Ron and Hermione very well. I love the Grangers asking if they're always like that. LOL

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gijane7702 February 23 2007, 00:38:36 UTC
If Muggles can be fascinated with wizards (because we all are, aren't we?), why can't wizards be fascinated with Muggles and their 'devices'?

I always have a tough time writing R/Hr, so I'm glad you think it worked out.

Thanks for reading =)

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kileaiya February 23 2007, 00:29:52 UTC
You captured Ron and Hermione's voices so well, and I agree with Janis, Mrs. Granger and the faerie thing was adorable. Bravo! :D

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gijane7702 February 23 2007, 00:40:04 UTC
Thanks, JoJo! Thanks for putting up with the freak outs over RHr and getting this done! *luff you*

Damn...I should have gone with expanding the fairie part.

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