DoJ: Chapter 41: The Lay of Bahzell Bloody-Hand

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Uff da. Okay, I would just like to say that I was NOT crying at a scene I wrote myself; Christy's House of Bishounen Torment was really dusty that day. Yeah. Dust. Gets in the eyes. :P

Also, please read the warnings for this chapter if you don't usually.

Comments

[makochanupdates]

Wonderful chapter, as always! I'm glad to know that Bhazell went out like a champ, not that I doubted he would. He's Bahzell. Anyway, I hope that Brandark can heal now that he's delivered the hard news to Bahnak. He deserves the break, I believe.

And the scenes with Relena, Une and Pargan? Priceless! I do so love it when the unassuming characters turn out to be so tricksty! And Pargan's the best there is! Heheh.

Oh, and if Duo's braid is damaged going after the Bleach characters, I'm going to very upset, ladies!

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Bahzell would never go down without one hell of a fight! As for Brandark... well... it's a start.

Just because they're good!Relena and sane!Une doesn't mean they can't also be competent!women. XD And Pargan's always been magnificent. :3

If Duo's braid is damaged you won't need to be upset - he and Heero will take us out! :P

[askerian]

--and fell flat on his face at the Bloody Sword’s feet as the nearest halfling curled into a ball and rolled into his legs, tripping him.
Muahahaha.

The hand not grooming his whiskers unobtrusively slipped a slightly less than fist-sized lump of lead back into his belt pouch -- something that might have started out as part of a load of ballast, exactly the right size and shape to weight a halfling’s hand for a punch solid enough to fell a hradani.
aaahahahahaha >D

poor daddyguy though. ;_;

“I saw the Scorpion riding him.” Brandark’s hands were shaking, and he gripped the armrest of the oversized chair he’d been given to sit in. “I heard the name from his own lips. I felt it, like something rancid brushing up against me in the dark, and I wanted to run or be sick or-- I don’t know. It was foul,” he said, shuddering at the memory, “and I am sure of what I say. I swear it. Harnak was a willing servant of Sharna Phrofro, and carried the god’s sword when he came to hunt your son down.”
*shivers irl* *___*

“Well, that certainly sounds

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Halflings from Marfang Island's navy or merchant marine get very good at fighting hradani. The Wild Wash may be shorter and not quite as tough as the Horse Stealers, but the principles are the same - including "The bigger they are, the easier they are to aim at!"

...wait. That's not quite it. Close enough. *ahem* anyway, yus, Evark is prepared. ;3

Yup. Poor Bahnak. ;_;

*blinkblink* CHRISTY! We made Asuka shiver! 8D

smart!Relena is a heck of a lot more fun to write! and so is sneaky!Pargan. ;)

You'll be glad to hear that the DoJ plunny is already nibbling the next chapter into my leg, then... :P

[siraj]

good hell... you really know how to get all the feels for me. Damn, Brandark... never mind the rest of the hradani! Boy needs a HUG... carefully, of course.

As for Relena, Pargan and Une? cle-ver~ though, the "deliver this to the boys across the street" bit... does Relena know of the ladies? curious....

[siraj]

Addendum: It's WONDERFUL to see a DoJ update! Thank you so much for the post!

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Oh yeah. All the hradani need a break, and Brandark needs a new reason to live. :(

*points up at that section of the fic* Yus, Duo and Quatre have been telling Relena 'gossip lady' stories off-camera. ;)

And thank you for the appreciation and feedback! XD

[shini_tenshi]

Pargan was my favorite~ I've actually done before, calling the police on other drivers for unsafe driving, especially when I'm 'lucky' enough to be behind them for more than a few minutes.

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Ditto. I got licence plate numbers for the twit who nearly ran me off the road and the motorbike running without lights, too!

[kyonakopper]

This chapter is beautiful~ Thank you! Such lovely writing~

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You're welcome, and thank you for the compliment! ;3