Obscurity

[mel0804]

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. This is a story about fear, uncertainty and doubt but also about friendship and love. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this story. I also want to thank judy-blue-cat who helped me

Comments

[mel0804]

Yes, they have an actual date ;-) - it feels good to imagine them having a good time, right?
The next part is coming soon.
Thank you so much for your comment.

[mel0804]

Hi Jen,

Thank you for your impatient patience... ;-). It's the best praise I can get and I'm so very happy you like this story. The next part is coming soon.

Mel

[bbmjack324]

I love this! A date! So cool!

Jack's eyes shimmered azure blue through his long lashes as he looked up at Ennis from below. “I... I thought... well I thought we could go together... to the movies?“...

Despite his limited mobility Jack radiated such a liveliness and dynamic that shattered Ennis....

“Wonderful,“ Jack stated and didn't expect any objections. “You pick me up at 7.“

[mel0804]

:-)
I'm glad you liked it !

[kmdlrd]

Hooray, a date to the movies. I love that together, they are each able to bring some happiness into their lonely and difficult lives. Thanks so much for sharing. - B

[mel0804]

Yes, they are - and it's very comforting to know that they are able to banish the loneliness from their life, isn't it?

Obscurity Jack Twist Part 2

[bmshirts]

Oh boy! Now things are starting to happen! A first date! Maybe after the movie, a nice dinner, a few drinks, then bed? Together?!!
Can't wait till next chapter. Thanks. Carole

Re: Obscurity Jack Twist Part 2

[mel0804]

* Maybe after the movie, a nice dinner, a few drinks, then bed? Together?!! *

Let's wait and see... ;-).
The next part is coming soon.
Thank you for your comment. I'm very glad you liked this chapter.