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[mel0804]

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. With this story I wanted to dive in the dark side of Brokeback Mountain. I wanted to experiment with fear, uncertainty and doubt. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this

Comments

[onlyonesock]

I'm really enjoying this story. Out of the despair and loneliness there's a spark of hope for each of them now. It's beautifully written and I love the nods to the movie scenes. More please.

[mel0804]

Yes, more is definitely coming... ;-)
Thank you for your comment. I'm really glad you are enjoying this story !

[caij]

Hey Mel,
Ich liebe diese geschichte,danke dir.

Liefs Carolien

[mel0804]

Ich freue mich - und danke Dir auch ;-) !!

[rosiet]

OH Mel. That these two DESPERATELY needy men both felt this reawakening of warmth, and life together,

***and he had the feeling that with Ennis also a comforting warmth was disappearing, something he had not felt for many, many years.****

***And like a wonderful flower burgeoning curiously and full of power from the bleak ground after a tentatively desert rain, Ennis felt all of a sudden life kiss him, releasing him from his cold rigor.***

...is just beautiful. I am completely hooked on this. I love them both and want so much for them. Now they can each say they have a friend, and I love it. I can't wait for more.

Thank you.

[mel0804]

As I had written this chapter I was relieved myself that they finally made a step forward. I hardly couldn't bear the thought that both men were so lonely...

But I think that's how they felt most of the time in the canon story... and this always makes so sad...

[mel0804]

Yes, the desperately need each other - and they start to see it... ;-)

Obscurity

[argentine65]

Mel: You described so well "the loneliness both felt deep inside of them. Loneliness and the desire to share the own pain." and their "vulnerability". I this is pure poetry: "And like a wonderful flower burgeoning curiously and full of power from the bleak ground after a tentatively desert rain, Ennis felt all of a sudden life kiss him, releasing him from his cold rigor." Thank you so much. Martha

Re: Obscurity

[mel0804]

You are welcome, Martha !
It makes me really happy that you enjoyed this chapter ! Thank you for letting me know !!!