and when you come, your majesty

[meelsie_love78]

Title: A Catalogue Of Sins, In Morning Light
Fandom: Wire in the Blood
Character/s: Tony Hill, Alex Fielding
Word Count: 1370
Spoilers: For the end of Season 6
Warning: ADULT THEMES. IE: SEX.
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, but I own the porny bits high-class erotica.
Summary: Tony has dirty flashbacks. Umm…
Author’s Note: Okay mammothluv, it’s not porn,

Comments

[angel_2606]

hi bb! *squees happily at the fic* And yes, I did reads it, even though I only know who this couple is through YOUR eyes. They sound like an awesome ship in any case.

Firstly: I LOVED the title! that alone made me fall in love with it!

Second: wow. Um..........wow. This piece DID have hotness in it! Granted, it was very subtle and the like, but dang. I liked that it was fairly subtle and teasing and all that. Like we knew that it was present and prevalent, but not too much so.

Third: I've probably said this before, but if not, I'll say it now: I adore your writing. You use this analogies and just different things that create all these evil images in my head and I'm all sorts of GAH when I read your fics. I really am, it's quite horrible. *winks*

Fourth: Can we haz more please? *grins*

[meelsie_love78]

Aww, you're so sweet, reading something from a fandom you've never seen! Thanks hon! They certainly are an awesome ship, and I'd be more than overjoyed to rec them to you. Once you're through with the Doctor Who, of course!

I'm so sorry to have provoked images in your head :D Especially if they're vaguely-smutty images! Now I just have to get organised and see if I can apply some smuttiness to writing some House/Cuddy...

[mammothluv]

I cannot find words to express my adoration of you and this story. I'm tempted to pull an Alex and just throw you against a wall and snog you senseless... Oh, that would probably be inappropriate. But, HOLY HELL. I LOVE THIS.

First, let's just get the necessary out of the way: ALEX IS AN ANIMAL. I love it and Tony obviously loves it beyond belief the lucky, bruised bastard.

I totally get what you were saying about the backwards porn now and it works very well. Not only does it seem quite in line with the way Tony's mind works but somehow the flashes of images as Tony's memories unfold make the whole thing sexier because we get those little glimpses intertwined with the morning after.

Some of my favorite bits:

He's never been clutched at before, never been wrenched and clawed and savaged with such forceful passion in his life.
Like I said, Alex = animal. She is a sexy, sexy beast.

Then he’d had that familiar feeling, that sudden expanse of opportunity opening before him. A moment, a pinpoint in time when he could

[meelsie_love78]

OH THANK FUCK YOU LIKED IT.

Ahem. Seriously, I feel like I'd built this thing up way too much and you were going to be horribly disappointed with the lack of, well, anything really, considering nothing much happens in this fic at all. And I'll take the damn snogging, thanks very much, to hell with being inappropriate. This thing took me forever to write, I deserve a reward.

ALEX IS AN ANIMAL.
Hmmm, you were unaware of this fact? How odd. She is a wicked, dirty, pornographic, uncontrollable, freaky as hell ANIMAL. Personally I don't know how someone as mild-mannered as Tony is going to handle it. I'll have to write some more so we can find out.

Oh, I'm glad you made that association with the backwards stuff and Tony's screwed up way of thinking! It happened by accident (which is the case for absolutely everything I write, by the way), but I figured it suited him to be having flashbacks whilst she tracked him down in the bathroom. I'm telling you, the woman is insatiable.

it apparently lead to the shag of his life and allMost

[mammothluv]

I loved it! Seriously! You deserve all the rewards in the world. *showers you with monies and candy and other various and sundry delightful things*

Oh, I was certainly aware of Alex's animal status. I just like to mention it as often as possible for the delightful mental images it provides and I would like to thank you for reinforcing said mental images with this fic.

I'll have to write some more so we can find out.Yes, yes. You must. It's your civic duty. *nods knowingly* Only you can address the very important issue of how Tony responds to Alex's insatiable sexual appetite. You wouldn't want to leave your reading public hanging, would you

[meelsie_love78]

*drowns happily in sundry delightful things*

See, I thought you just might have had an inkling about Alex's hornbag capacities. How could you possibly have missed it?! (with skirts like hers.)

I think you've got every right to carry on about kindred spirits and soul mates etc. Sad as it is, I feel the same way. How else do you explain it? Carol leaves and suddenly this total fox appears in Tony's life, and they're just perfect together and complement each other and everything just easy and they just work. It's fate, it's always been fate, with these two. *hangs head in shame

[angel_2606]

Well, it was YOU that wrote it, dear. So of course, I had to give it a shot. :) I'm not sure if I will ever be "through" with Who, as you say. I just.........yeah, I've got a bit of a love affair with Who now, and it's all thanks to you, you EVIL woman!

Don't be sorry, dear. Well, unless it makes me start writing House/Cuddy. *grins* And smutty images are wonderful, are you kidding me?! Granted, they drive me crazy more often than not, but meh.

And YES, YOU DOES NEED to get organized and write us some SMUTTY House/Cuddy! *bounces*

[meelsie_love78]

Well, thanks again! I haven't written much in such a long time, and I feel pretty rusty and awkward doing it. I'm so lucky you're sweet enough to read my crap! *big hugs*

See, I knew you'd love Who! I just knew it, it's right up your alley. Told you it was brilliant, didn't I?

Oh, House/Cuddy. Why am I feeling such little creativity with them right now? Maybe it's just because the idea of them being happy is so much harder to get my head around than the idea of them being angsty (at least in terms of writing). How would one even go about writing happy!House? The concept is too weird. One idea that might be cute that I've been toying with is a fic based around House's team and Wilson of course finding out about them. That way, I wouldn't actually have to write House and Cuddy themselves, I could just have them off shagging in hospital closets or something, and have Taub etc trying to bust them at it... I don't know. Whoever knew having House and Cuddy together would be so perplexing?!?!

[angel_2606]

How sad is it that I'm only just NOW realizing that I didn't reply right before? *headdesk

[xamanthe]

Hi, it's me again, leaving random comments.

Love that you put all your fic in one post. *smootches*

After watching that last episode, I could not believe the series ended there. I wanted to see this very scene SO bad (or at least one enough like it we could watch it on TV. Somehow, it's almost better imagining it rather than seeing, especially with the details you write in.

I love that Alex couldn't wait to kiss him, then got a little scared when he didn't respond "normally" (what's normal for Tony isn't the same as anyone else) Glad Tony finally got with the plan and kissed her back. Yay Tony!

I also loved that they talked and talked and talked. So cute. These two together just make me smile. It's such a sweet relationship when contrasted against the horror of their cases. I'm so sad there isn't more WitB eps. *sigh*

Loved this fic. Thanks for sharing!

[meelsie_love78]

Hi! Random comments are fine by me!

Yeah, I thought tidying up wouldn't be a bad idea. It turns out I've written more on these two than I thought! (And strangely, almost everything seems to be post-6.04...)

I'm so pleased you enjoyed this; it's one of those fics where not much really happens, but I kind of like the idea of Alex and Tony having some time together where not much happens (except for snogging etc). It makes a nice change from lots of horrible things happening, which is how life usually is for them.

These two together just make me smile.
That's so true, I feel exactly the same way. They're so adorable and heartwarming and lovely together! And they complement each other so perfectly. I can't get enough of them, obviously.

Thanks again for reading!