Bizarre Love Triangle, Part 1/3
Title: Bizarre Love Triangle
Author: radiantbabyCharacters/Pairings: Ten/Martha, Dr. John/Martha, Ten/Martha/Dr. John [Note: Dr. John was a David Tennant character in the “Reproduction” episode of “Love in the 21st Century ( Read more... )
Author: radiantbabyCharacters/Pairings: Ten/Martha, Dr. John/Martha, Ten/Martha/Dr. John [Note: Dr. John was a David Tennant character in the “Reproduction” episode of “Love in the 21st Century ( Read more... )
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I'm so sorry that I've been lagging with the comments on your lovely stories (like with your Ten/Martha 1969 fic, for example), but I'm sure to get working on that today!
Guh, this was amazing! Hot, angsty and sweet all at once, how much do I love it whenever John would say "Come back", I loved it in Atonement and even more so now here in your story ♥ Ten has awful timing for a Time-Lord, but his confession about killed me!
“Doctor, I’ve moved on. I have someone who loves me now, someone who appreciates me, and is good to me. I can’t bother with chasing you around any longer.”
“You don’t have to chase me. I’m right here.”
The last part made me choke down a sob - poor, poor Ten. But at the same time, I feel so much for Martha, being stuck in such a difficult position :\
I love that John "makes a memory" for Martha, absolutely lovely ♥ I can't wait for the next installment!!
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That's definitely fine. I am terrible at commenting myself, I notice that often I reply in my head and then forget to actually post that comment (I do that with emails and comments I need to reply to as well, and always have a good laugh at myself when I catch myself doing so)!
Anyway, as long as you enjoy my writing, I am happy with that! :)
Guh, this was amazing! Hot, angsty and sweet all at once, how much do I love it whenever John would say "Come back", I loved it in Atonement and even more so now here in your story ♥
Thanks! Yes, I liked the "Come back" part as well -- I couldn't resist putting it in there, it seemed very apropos to John's character. :)
Ten has awful timing for a Time-Lord, but his confession about killed me!Good, it was meant to be a very emotional thing for him and the audience -- I am glad that was effective for you. We all know ( ... )
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I am so happy that Martha has John for an anchor in her life and that he can help her navigate things with both Ten and people like Jack. I think he really supports her and loves her and I think that is just what she needs right now.
Yes, I think the Doctor loves her as well, but sometimes people need that verbal validation as well, no matter how strong they are. Sadly, the Doctor is always going to be a challenge in that way, but I like that they are getting on the same page with things.
LOL @ "that disappearing geezer"!
P.S. On a completely shallow note, I added this super-hawt icon I'm using to the martha_dr_john icons -- I just think John looks so deliciously naughty in this pic! PHWROAR!
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LOL! Well, this one ended up much longer than I expected, so it took a bit longer than I wanted. Hopefully shorter stories in the future will be much quicker to write. :)
Anyway, great fiction as always!
Thanks so much! I am so glad that you liked it! :)
So excited to read the upcoming two parts! The plot thickens *runs hands together*!
Well, I'm just about to post the second part in a few minutes, so you won't have long to wait at all (God, it's been so weird having a finished story and not posting it all at once -- but persiflage_1 and I thought it would be a neat idea to post it over three days since it turned out so bloody long).
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The Doctor has horrible timing but... better late than never I guess. Martha's rebuttal of the Doctor and her refusal to take his kind words at face value is very real and very heartwrenching (right on, too!). He hurt her deeply and I like that she is finally letting him see that (even if I want them to fight and get to the secksin...lol)
Wonderful job, as always!
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Oh haiden23, don't we all? *sigh*
I love how supportive he is of Martha - wanting to turn her bad experiences in 1913 into a wonderful memory and telling her that she should give the Doctor a chance (again). I love him! *squishes John*
He is a really good guy, a healer-type, and completely devoted to Martha, so it definitely makes sense to me that he would approach their relationship that way. I'm glad Martha has someone like him to be there for her. :)
The Doctor has horrible timing but... better late than never I guess.
Yeah, that's what I think. :)
Martha's rebuttal of the Doctor and her refusal to take his kind words at face value is very real and very heartwrenching (right on, too!). He hurt her deeply and I like that she is finally letting him see thatYeah, it's hard to put them through that, but I had to try and approach things from how I thought Martha would be feeling in the situation. I'm not gonna lie, if I were in her shoes, ( ... )
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