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Bizarre Love Triangle, Part 1/3

Jul 22, 2008 23:14

Title: Bizarre Love Triangle
Author: radiantbabyCharacters/Pairings: Ten/Martha, Dr. John/Martha, Ten/Martha/Dr. John [Note: Dr. John was a David Tennant character in the “Reproduction” episode of “Love in the 21st Century ( Read more... )

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Comments 37

mulder200 July 23 2008, 04:09:09 UTC

The Doctor's timing as always leaves much to be desired. LOL!

I must say you have quite the hand at writing sex scenes that are neither too graphic nor trashy but just right.

radiantbaby July 23 2008, 07:00:24 UTC

The Doctor's timing as always leaves much to be desired. LOL!

I know, right? He can be such a mess sometimes, but I guess that is part of what makes him an interesting character -- he "puts the fun in dysfunctional." :)

Oh, and by the way, he makes a few more mis-steps in future parts -- so be on the lookout! LOL!

I must say you have quite the hand at writing sex scenes that are neither too graphic nor trashy but just right.

Thank you -- that really means a lot! I always try to veer more toward erotica than straight-up porn when I write (with exceptions of course), but I'm never really sure if I pull that off effectively.

Thanks for commenting!

xebgoc July 23 2008, 04:45:53 UTC

oh, YAY ! I've *missed* John and Martha... and may I just say...
*GUH* a maid's costume ? whew !

radiantbaby July 23 2008, 07:05:39 UTC

*stares at your icon*

I'm sorry, were you saying something? Why no, I don't have a weird fetish for that part of David's neck just behind his ear.

oh, YAY ! I've *missed* John and Martha...

Well, I'm glad I could deliver. There are two more long parts to go (especially part two -- that monster is 9441 words long!), so you should get more of your fix over the next few days. :)

and may I just say...*GUH* a maid's costume ? whew !

Yeah, I couldn't resist! I mean, why should Martha have bad associations with a maid costume when her and John can have such fun in one! And I really, really, really need Dr. John as a therapist! *fans self*

pherber_m July 23 2008, 05:40:44 UTC

This is lovely! I hope John doesn't come to regret his generosity toward the Doctor - let's face it, Ten has an amazing tendency to make a mess of his relationships.

radiantbaby July 23 2008, 07:10:01 UTC

This is lovely!

Thanks -- I am so glad that you enjoyed it! I was really, really nervous about it!

I hope John doesn't come to regret his generosity toward the Doctor - let's face it, Ten has an amazing tendency to make a mess of his relationships.

Well, you'll just have to see -- there's a bumpy ride ahead, that's for certain, and you are right, Ten can be really adept a wrecking his relationships (and trust me, that is touched on in this sory), but there just might be a light at the end of the tunnel. Stay tuned! :)

abstruse_fangrl July 23 2008, 06:37:40 UTC

I love the idea of John helping Martha to get over her pain from 1913 (and all those other times) by making new memories with her. And such a lovely way to do it!

And the thought of the Doctor staying on earth time, more or less for her...

Poor Ten! ::hugs him::

radiantbaby July 23 2008, 07:22:06 UTC

I love the idea of John helping Martha to get over her pain from 1913 (and all those other times) by making new memories with her. And such a lovely way to do it!

I know -- I wish I had John to do such therapy with me as well! Phrwoar!

I did worry that might sound weird, but for some reason I got the idea in my head that he would be the type to do something like that. Call me crazy, but there you go. I just think it's really important to him to help Martha with her traumas as much as he can, especially as he knows what it is like to let such things fester too long within yourself (which basically sums up his teen years). It doesn't hurt that he takes very "creative" approaches to such things. :)

And the thought of the Doctor staying on earth time, more or less for her...

Poor Ten! ::hugs him::Yeah, well, if you can imagine at this point in the game, he's been alone for about a year (and his only real connection right now is to Martha -- who hasn't called). I had considered having Donna in the timeline already, but she wasn't ( ... )

syien_island July 23 2008, 11:00:46 UTC

Thank god for John & Martha! Do you know how hard it is looking for new Martha fics on whofic?! Anywhooo...

For the third time since you and pers came out fabtastic series, I've begun to hate Ten for affecting Martha like he does. I want to see her and John get married and have a litter of puppies together, and here comes the Doctor. all remorseful and still moody, telling her he loves her. This is so not going to be a piece of cake for anyone. I can only hope John and Martha's relationship will still be strong and true.
Oh, and the secksing is a godsend. You've made my day.

radiantbaby July 23 2008, 11:50:25 UTC

Thank god for John & Martha!

Yep -- luff them!

Do you know how hard it is looking for new Martha fics on whofic?!

Oh, trust me, I know! That is partially why I try and write as many of them as I can. It's sad that only a few people are writing Martha fics these days as opposed to during S3 when there was all sorts of fiction about her. *sigh*

For the third time since you and pers came out fabtastic series, I've begun to hate Ten for affecting Martha like he does. I want to see her and John get married and have a litter of puppies together, and here comes the Doctor. all remorseful and still moody, telling her he loves her. This is so not going to be a piece of cake for anyone. I can only hope John and Martha's relationship will still be strong and true.Well, thankfully Martha and John have a very strong relationship to deal with all of this, but there is definitely going to be a few obstacles and such to get through by the end of this story -- as you said, it's not going to be a piece of cake ( ... )