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maggiemoore

The Bar

Feb 27, 2009 10:56

Title: The Bar
Fandom: How I Met Your Mother
Pairing: Barney/Robin
Rating: Teen for occasional language
Summary: The first half of a new episode in the How I Met Your Mother story. Barney's been hiding feelings for Robin for awhile, and while he's been able to keep them in check for now, he finds his own resolve tested by a newcomer from another bar.

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jo_granger2010 February 28 2009, 19:23:04 UTC

yay!!!! seriously, some of the best HIMYM fic I've read so far. So in character and adorable :) hugs! eat more chocolate now, you deserve it!

maggiemoore February 28 2009, 19:25:18 UTC

=DDDD Thanks, hun! <333

ickysheep February 28 2009, 22:41:45 UTC

yeah! that was AWESOME!
your writing is phenomenal! like in the show. they could use your fic as a script... your picture the interactions between the characters and the characters themselves perfectly and authentic. really gorgesome...:)

there's gonna be a next part? can't wait for it. you actually make me read HIMYM fics in future I think :)

maggiemoore March 1 2009, 14:51:57 UTC

Thank you so much, I'm so flattered by all your fabulous compliments! I'm really glad that you felt the interactions were authentic, because that's the highest goal for my fanfiction. Heehee 'gorgesome', that is brilliant!
I am definitely going to be working on the next part soon (hopefully within the next few days), so keep your eyes open! =D

hermione_solo March 1 2009, 06:07:43 UTC

Ok awesome! This is so original and beleavable I could almost here the lough track! you rock. Icannotwait for the next one!

maggiemoore March 1 2009, 14:53:16 UTC

Thank you so much! I hope to have the next one done soon, probably within the week!

sbmshaneomaniac March 2 2009, 02:42:33 UTC

Oh I think I love you. Really. PLEASE write more. I need more. I love this so very much. I kinda like episode style fics, I haven't read too many of them.

I will pay you in candy to continue. Pretty pretty?

maggiemoore March 3 2009, 10:32:15 UTC

Who can say no to candy?? Thank you! =D

solojones May 1 2009, 19:32:38 UTC

Just started reading this since you posted the last part... anyway, loved this. Poor Barney, but getting beat up will probably just help him with Robin, right?

maggiemoore May 2 2009, 08:36:20 UTC

I dunno, it MIGHT help... =D And thanks for going back to read it! I hope you liked the following chapters!