The Bar

[maggiemoore]

Title: The Bar
Fandom: How I Met Your Mother
Pairing: Barney/Robin
Rating: Teen for occasional language
Summary: The first half of a new episode in the How I Met Your Mother story. Barney's been hiding feelings for Robin for awhile, and while he's been able to keep them in check for now, he finds his own resolve tested by a newcomer from another bar.

Comments

[maggiemoore]

Thank you so much! The one thing I strive for above everything is to keep my portrayal of fandom characters realistic, so to call my work in character is the biggest compliment to me.

And I trust too much in Robin's kick-assiness to let Barney save her without her help. ;D Thank you again! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope to continue it soon.

[maggiemoore]

Thank you! =D

[1angelette]

"Great... well, it has food."

"You slept with a guy because he was naked."
"You have got to get over that."

"Now, readers [...] this is how Barney swears it happened."

"I'm Canadian."

"And that’s the story of how Barney got that scar just above his ear. Oh, and how Marshall broke his toe."

[maggiemoore]

xD

[maggiemoore]

Thank you so much! I'm glad I won you over despite your aversion to episode fics. ;D I hope I continue to do so in the next parts!

[maggiemoore]

=D Thank you, I'm honoured!

[roland44]

That was brilliant. So in character, so very hilarious, so inventive and original and yet so in line with the show. I love your Ted voice, and love how you make Barney jealous and paranoid. We want a follow-up!!!

>Oh, and how Marshall broke his toe.
Um, how? When? Where?

[maggiemoore]

Thank you so much!!

And the Marshall breaking his toe bit was from him stubbing his toe on the table, and then Lily doing something to it to make him shut up when he was talking to Ted. I'll probably elaborate more in the second part. =D

[phantmgreeneyes]

fantastic!!! i loved super hero barney. <3 saving the day dressed to the nines.

[maggiemoore]

What can I say? He's awesome. Thank you for the kind review!!