NEW FIC: "Prelude To Sex", R/Hr, Rated R

Nov 13, 2005 21:48

Title: Prelude To Sex
Pairing: Ron/Hermione
Rating: Hard R
Warnings: Mutual masturbation, first time (in a sense)
Word count: 2069
Feedback: Is my Mr Tibbles, baby.
Summary: “What he would look like, hovering above her. How his back would arch if she gave him pleasure. What his hands would look like on her darker skin, curving around her hip. ”

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harry potter, smut, my fanfiction, ron/hermione

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roargh November 13 2005, 23:01:58 UTC
That was beautiful.

And that song is hot. She turns me on, but I'm only dancing.. nice fit to the story. :) (On a side note: the music video for that song turns me on too... you'll have to excuse me, huge Bowie fanatic I am.)

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:16:27 UTC
Thank you so much! :D

Have to say - you are ruddy quick off the mark! Only just put the story up... :)

And God, that song is indeed gorgeous. Yeah, I like having songs ironically fic to my posts, if I can - like if it's about some crazy H/Hr shipper I play Smashing Pumpkins. ;D And - *drools* at the music video! Bowie is so unbelievably sexy. That and Ziggy Stardust (the live concert version) are my favourite songs of his... oh, and Heroes! :D

Thanks again!

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roargh November 13 2005, 23:26:11 UTC
Jeez, I'm a Smashing Pumpkins fanatic too! I've even met Billy Corgan :) I can't say which is my favorite Bowie song, though.. too many great ones to choose from.

You've really hit my sweet spot with your musical tastings, mind if I add you?

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:30:08 UTC
Not at all, I'll add you back! :D Always glad to have new friends.

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:31:25 UTC
Welcome, cheers!

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vivisco November 13 2005, 23:28:53 UTC
Loved it! Very sweet. :)

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:34:10 UTC
Thank you, dear! (Your icon is so true...)

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kilted November 13 2005, 23:30:20 UTC
You would not believe how much I want this to be what happens in the book. Dear lord...
That was beautiful and wonderful and amazing. You just feel warm and pleasant and happy after reading it. It feels like a first kiss, haha...

Great work.

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:41:00 UTC
I feel your pain. JKR would be so good at smut, it's untrue.

And thank you so much! What a lovely review. :) I really enjoyed writing, so I'm chuffed to pieces it made someone happy! :D

And I love your icon. Charlie is my favourite by far.

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kilted November 13 2005, 23:47:56 UTC
Hey, I only speak the truth, haha... :)
It was seriously wonderful and that was the best way I could describe it. Still don't think I did it justice, really...

And thanks! My dear sweet green_queen made it special for me. Got to love Dom...

and um, not to shamelessly pimp myself, but I've notice a large amount Ron love in your journal. Have you seen teh_weasle?

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:51:27 UTC
Aaah! Another drool-worthy icon! :DDDD

Aw, you're making me blush!

Yes, why indeedy I have much Ron love over here - and thanks! I'll check it out! :D

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shocolate November 13 2005, 23:30:36 UTC
Oh, god.

How do we get this into book seven?

Because it just has to happen.

Well, we had two whole chapters not from Harry's POV last time, didn't we?

That was really hot and utterly adorable and your Ron was so sexy, and I almost never read Hermione's POV, which I should, because she is drooling over Rons!!

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:43:17 UTC
*dances with glee* Oh, I'm so in awe of your coolness and dedication to Ron - I love it when you read my stories!! :DDD

Ahem. Anyway. And yeah! Two Book Seven chapters dedicated to smut! Good plan.

Thank you so much - and yeah, even if she's played by a flittering twerp, she's got damn fine taste.

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shocolate November 13 2005, 23:45:52 UTC
Oh, you silly old thing!

Although I admit I slink away and don't review if anyone has a bad Ron.

Flittering twerp is a good description, yes, but at least she begs for ron and Hermione to get it on all the time - she doesn't annoy me so much anymore!

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madoldmrsfigg November 13 2005, 23:48:34 UTC
:D

Yes, I know what you mean - I turn away completely if I spy an OOC Ron. I get angry, damnit.

Haha! True, she is redeeming herself. You see that new clip, the dress robes? The bitchy Hermione I ignored in favour of the Harry crushing on Ron - "they match your eyes"! Honestly, he SO wants it.

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