Ooh! A topic!

[madlori]

Okay, have thought of a topic to alleviate boredom with Fanfic Discussion

Comments

[rachet]

Napoleon needs a devoted girlfriend who is from the states and her name is Rachel and he's head over heels in love with her and...

wait...

PoU?

*sigh* Nevermind. He's barely in PoU.

[madlori]

You're so predictable. ;-)

[firedawn]

Definitely eliminate Draco/Quinn. That was kinda a WTF moment for me. I'll re-read PoU this weekend and let you know what else bothers me. With any luck it'll be a long list.

[photosinensis]

Get rid of the Buffy crossover in STNE. It was, in my opinion, the weakest part of the series.

[jacyevans]

I second that. As much as I liked it as first, it seemed extremely out of place with everything else that was going on in the chapter.

[yenesi]

me three or four or.... a little strange for me on that part, Buffy was straight from left field.

changes

[pippin23]

That was exactly what I was going to bring up. I also think some of the stuff between the Master and Allegra sexually could be removed. We got the point about his dominance of her. It takes a lot to get me squirmy about fan fic. I always ended up skimming those sex scenes because they didn't add to the story. That was really the only area that seemed gratuitous. (And I am usually a big fan of gratuitous)

Thanks for sharing your baby with us. I know it's yours, but it takes a lot to go soliciting this kind of "what did you hate".

[madlori]

Getting people from point A to point B is always the most difficult part of writing. Big scenes are easy...it's those transitional moments that make you crazy.

[snarky_kat]

I agree on the Draco/Quinn thing. There was really no point, and it didn't last long enough to become an issue.

I'll have to use my afternoon off to re-read it. Oh darn. =) Yay for excuse.

[snarky_kat]

http://fanfiction.portkey.org/story/305

This always amuses me =)