What About Now? : Nightfall (5/?)

Mar 02, 2008 21:58

Title: What About Now? (Nightfall, 5/?)
+Author: Izzi, luvmeanddespair
+Pairing/Characters: Currently: YooSu, JaeHoMin, JaeChun.
+Rating/Genre: This part PG-13, some angst and fluff.
+Summary: Nightfall: A change happens in the group, supposedly for the better, but can the group survive?
+AN: Hey...guys. -_-;; It's been almost three months. I am so, so sorry. I ( Read more... )

dbsk, fic, what about now?, izzi

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butterflyweb March 3 2008, 04:40:03 UTC
Duuude, I remember reading this a really long time ago. But yay for update! :)

Jealous!Yunho does things to my insides, and frankly, I think Jaejoong had a good smack coming. While Jaechun sends me to a happy place, he unapologetically cheated on his lovers and I don't know, me kind of wants him punished for that a little, rather than sexed up. Imagine if all of our transgressions were rewarded with possessive!Yunho sex...Jae needs to make this up to him. *sermonizes*

That being said, loved this:

“Faster, he’s going to hang up!”

“I’m working on it!”

“Yoboseyo! HELLO?”

“YOBOSEYO!”

“JUNSU-AH!”

“Yah! Deafen me, why don’t you!” yelps Junsu at the other end.

So win.

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luvmeanddespair March 3 2008, 05:11:01 UTC
I love you so much. Because you make me do things that need to be done. Like write or clarify.

he unapologetically cheated on his lovers and I don't know, me kind of wants him punished for that a little

Yes. That was something that has bugged me about these last two chapters. Jaejoong really just not understanding how his actions effect his relationships with, well, everyone. It wasn't fair to Yunho or Changmin, even if Min said he was fine. It wasn't fair to Junsu, even if he and Yoochun put their relationship on pause. And if you really want to go there, you could say it wasn't fair to Yoochun ( ... )

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kurogoma March 3 2008, 11:34:42 UTC
it's good that changmin was understanding and that yunho finally listened and accepted it, albeit grudgingly, but undeniably they did still have mixed feelings of jealousy and hurt. i do wonder whether did it ever cross jaejoong's mind when he decided to sleep with yoochun, that there would be a possibility that it might irreversibly break the yunjae relationship and perhaps pushed yunho away? would he then be able to justify his actions of putting his friendship with yoochun over his relationship with min and yunho.

and now that the four seemingly got it our of their system (though i kinda agree that jaejoong got off easy) junsu is returning. how would he take all that in?

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luvmeanddespair March 3 2008, 23:23:37 UTC
do wonder whether did it ever cross jaejoong's mind when he decided to sleep with yoochun, that there would be a possibility that it might irreversibly break the yunjae relationship and perhaps pushed yunho away?

The answer to that is NO. Jaejoong didn't think it through. He probably believed that he thought it through--but he didn't. And it is going to cause major problems--it already has.

It's funny you mentioned YunJae specifically, because in the phone part, while there's mentions of all of them, only Changmin and Yunho are seen physically interacting. We assume that Jaejoong is nearby them, but I never actually mentioned where he was in relation to the other two.

how would he take all that in?

That's the real question, isn't it? It's not going to be pretty, I can tell you that.

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kurogoma March 6 2008, 06:00:59 UTC

It's funny you mentioned YunJae specifically,

that was because yunho, unlike changmin, gave me the impression that he wasn't the sort to accept it so easily, despite having the talk with jaejoong. i did noticed the physical gestures between minho but didn't relate that to yunjae, but now i see the possibility.

i also did wonder about the ease in which yunho accepts his relationship wth jaejoong and changmin (i don't know who he was with first so can't assume who came into the threeway relationship later) yet he couldn't accept fully jaechun sleeping together.
though if looking at it from another way, he is in love with both of them....

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chloe1910 March 28 2008, 04:11:52 UTC
Wow...I missed this fic! It has been quit sometime since you've updated this fic. Why didn't I see this update??? *smack myself ( ... )

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