Oh very well, I have no self-control whatsoever...
I wrote something for Asuka. Because I've been enjoying her fics and art for years, and she wanted someone to do something based on her works that she wanted to read but not write, and it probably isn't that great, but here it is.
( for asuka )
( for asuka )
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Naruto's harem, or the baby Uchihas? ^_^
I love all the little details that hint at a much deeper and complicated universe. I think i want to read the way they got together, all of them, and the villagers initial reaction and tsunade and all. they all sound so entangled.
That was sort of the general idea -- for some reason, I seem to find it easier to write settled relationships than get-togethers. (Granted, in most of my fandoms, the world and his wife seem to be willing to write the get-togethers, so I only have to concentrate on showing that they do in fact work together...)
That and it's beach!fic. For some reason, every beach!story I write keeps trying to dissolve into pwp-ness: lots of details and images, but who needs plot when you can just lie out in the sand and maybe take a dip in the water now and then?
(Although konoha points out that beach episodes in a TV series are usually character development episodes and short on plot, anyway ( ... )
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yes, kiba, come and join the uchiha pack!!!
I really *don't* know where this will go from here -- and actually, I'm not sure how Kiba would work with the others, so I don't know that him joining per se would be the best of ideas -- but, well... Naruto is not the most socially intuitive of people, but I think he's been noticing that Hinata's been tending to do a "cheese stands alone" thing when the kids aren't around, so the back of his mind has been worrying over "Hinata-chan ought to get out more" for a while now while the front of his mind is occupied with kids, Saki-chan, ramen, and wow-my-balance-is-fscked-when-I'm-pregnant.
really, this is sweet and cute and i love the details, but i'd love even more to see a fic explaning how they got together -- if you don't want to, just summarize for me plz? X3 *looks cute* i'm so curious.
Well, I'll *try*.
If some of it decides not to be written, I will summarize.
ahh, harem-love fics. and there's a good reason for it to fit with the narusaki thing too!! * ( ... )
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- Kou, out of Sakura by Sasuke, ten years old. Has Sakura's face shape, Sasuke's eyes, and, due to a recent accident involving the triplets, paint, and chewing gum, Sasuke's hair from the beginning of the series. Considers himself the natural leader of the group, and is almost as smart as he thinks he is. Plans to grow up to be the Seventh Hokage or a consulting detective. Calls his parents: Uchiha-sensei! (with politer forms of speech, yet <-- result of really indelible five-year-old impression), Toosan, Okaasan, Ino-mama, Hinata-mama, Saki-mama. (in English: Mr. Uchiha, SIR!, Dad, Mother, Ino-mommy, Hinata-mommy, Saki-mommy.) Name spelt with the character "light/shining."
- Inoko, out of Ino by Sasuke, eight years old. Looks like Ino with black hair and eyes; she and her twin are taller than Kou, much to his disgruntlement. Perfectly sure that she ought to be the natural leader of the group, ( ... )
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I agree with asukasama! Complexness! Uchiha pack <3<3<3! :D
More pleeeeeease?! :3 *glomps you* I want to know as well~ <3<3
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And it works so well, even though it sounds so warped wrong.
I read a lot of Spider Robinson in high school, and I've loved Diane Duane since before then. Groups *take* more effort to make work than two people -- just look at any extended family, without bringing polyamorous relationships into it at all -- but when they work, they work splendidly. I am part of an extended family that makes effort to keep the ties strong, and I get along well with almost all my aunts and uncles and cousins.
More pleeeeeease?! :3 *glomps you*
*Oooff*. ^_^
I want to know as well~
I wrote two more short little things, and I intend to do more when the characters tell me about them. ^_^
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Yes, I know how an extended family relationship works <-is hispanic. And it does seem that applying it to the Sakiverse actually works. o.o
Oooh, really? Zomg thankies for the "Uchiha Roll Call" and *gasps* is that a link? *runs off to read*
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We're lucky, aren't we? ^_^
And it does seem that applying it --
Well, a multiple-partners-with-children will either be Biting Snake Pit Of Oneupmanship or an extended family, depending on how well it was set up in the first place and how much effort everyone involved puts into it.
Given the personalities involved and the fact that I don't much care for dark worldviews, it came out thus.
thankies for the "Uchiha Roll Call"
You're welcome!
The fact that I spent about two hours working out the family and the kids and the interpersonal relationships before I started writing probably says something about me, but I'm not sure what.
I suppose the link down there is a little unnoticeable; I'll just put it again for those who missed it.
Things that happened before this fic.
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p.s. I second/third the more please!beg ^_^
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Some parts of this universe seem much more willing to talk to me than others. ;_;
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On another note, hehehe, this was marvelously written. I was oh-so-confused at first, and I think I side with Kiba on it all, haha, but regardless, this was a hilarious and awesomely written, detailed story. I think I'd like to know more as well! hahaha...so! GREAT job!
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Oh, GOOD.
I was really, really uncertain as to whether I was getting Kiba right.
this was a hilarious and awesomely written, detailed story.
Thank you so much!
This kind of fic, I tend to start out picturing as if it were a doujinshi, and then trying to reduce the pictures into words, and winding up leaving a bunch of stuff that I thought of out because all it does is make the story even longer and less flowing.
And I'm glad it was funny -- my sense of humor doesn't always translate well.
I think I'd like to know more as well! hahaha...
...this is a fiendish conspiracy on the part of you all to keep me from writing my xxxHolic crossovers, isn't it.
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*goes off to his happy place*
...ahem.
Anyway, yay Poly! I like it!
Ja, -n
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One aims to please. ^_^
Anyway, yay Poly! I like it!
Thank you very much! I was a little uncertain as to how this would be received...
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