Oh very well, I have no self-control whatsoever...

Sep 09, 2005 20:47

I wrote something for Asuka. Because I've been enjoying her fics and art for years, and she wanted someone to do something based on her works that she wanted to read but not write, and it probably isn't that great, but here it is.

for asuka )

saki-chan, fanfic

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askerian September 9 2005, 21:32:27 UTC
ahhhh!!!!!!! HAREM. NARUTO HAS A HAREM. BABY UCHIHAS. oh god i think i love you. reallyreally. i've wanted to see that for so long. ;______; and it's sososososo nice of you to write for me. eeeee. ;____; *moved ( ... )

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luriko_ysabeth September 12 2005, 12:08:00 UTC
i've wanted to see that for so long.

Naruto's harem, or the baby Uchihas? ^_^

I love all the little details that hint at a much deeper and complicated universe. I think i want to read the way they got together, all of them, and the villagers initial reaction and tsunade and all. they all sound so entangled.

That was sort of the general idea -- for some reason, I seem to find it easier to write settled relationships than get-togethers. (Granted, in most of my fandoms, the world and his wife seem to be willing to write the get-togethers, so I only have to concentrate on showing that they do in fact work together...)

That and it's beach!fic. For some reason, every beach!story I write keeps trying to dissolve into pwp-ness: lots of details and images, but who needs plot when you can just lie out in the sand and maybe take a dip in the water now and then?

(Although konoha points out that beach episodes in a TV series are usually character development episodes and short on plot, anyway ( ... )

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luriko_ysabeth September 12 2005, 14:08:39 UTC
LJ-comment-cutoff is Evil.

yes, kiba, come and join the uchiha pack!!!

I really *don't* know where this will go from here -- and actually, I'm not sure how Kiba would work with the others, so I don't know that him joining per se would be the best of ideas -- but, well... Naruto is not the most socially intuitive of people, but I think he's been noticing that Hinata's been tending to do a "cheese stands alone" thing when the kids aren't around, so the back of his mind has been worrying over "Hinata-chan ought to get out more" for a while now while the front of his mind is occupied with kids, Saki-chan, ramen, and wow-my-balance-is-fscked-when-I'm-pregnant.

really, this is sweet and cute and i love the details, but i'd love even more to see a fic explaning how they got together -- if you don't want to, just summarize for me plz? X3 *looks cute* i'm so curious.

Well, I'll *try*.

If some of it decides not to be written, I will summarize.

ahh, harem-love fics. and there's a good reason for it to fit with the narusaki thing too!! * ( ... )

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Uchiha Roll Call! (1) luriko_ysabeth September 12 2005, 14:34:48 UTC
i'm not sure i placed all the children -- and i want to know which one calls which mom what. it sounds so cute and complicated and adorable.

- Kou, out of Sakura by Sasuke, ten years old. Has Sakura's face shape, Sasuke's eyes, and, due to a recent accident involving the triplets, paint, and chewing gum, Sasuke's hair from the beginning of the series. Considers himself the natural leader of the group, and is almost as smart as he thinks he is. Plans to grow up to be the Seventh Hokage or a consulting detective. Calls his parents: Uchiha-sensei! (with politer forms of speech, yet <-- result of really indelible five-year-old impression), Toosan, Okaasan, Ino-mama, Hinata-mama, Saki-mama. (in English: Mr. Uchiha, SIR!, Dad, Mother, Ino-mommy, Hinata-mommy, Saki-mommy.) Name spelt with the character "light/shining."

- Inoko, out of Ino by Sasuke, eight years old. Looks like Ino with black hair and eyes; she and her twin are taller than Kou, much to his disgruntlement. Perfectly sure that she ought to be the natural leader of the group, ( ... )

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Uchiha Roll Call! (2) luriko_ysabeth September 12 2005, 14:40:41 UTC
- The triplets, six years old: in no particular order, Akari, out of Ino by Sasuke, looks like a black-eyed Hatoko-chan from Angelic Layer, quietly and benevolently evil in a sweetly smiling way; Hikari, out of Hinata by Naruto, in looks and personality is Naruto if he'd had two X chromosomes, black hair, the Byakugan, and a solid grounding in a stable family environment, wears her hair in two pigtails like Naruto's o-iroke form; Mei, out of Sakura by Sasuke, looks like a very young black-eyed Misao from Rurouni Kenshin, energetic and athletic and she was the one convinced there were monsters in the futon closet. Mei was a little early, Akari was really early, and Hikari was late, with the result that they all wound up being born on the same day and nobody's quite sure which one is older than which (hence, "the triplets"). They feed off each other. Iruka has a pyramid of Excedrin-equivalent laid in against the day they enter the academy. At the moment, the triplets aren't sure whether they want to grow up to be the kunoichi team of ( ... )

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trishalynn August 8 2009, 14:57:57 UTC
Re: Uchiha Roll Call! (2) luriko_ysabeth August 12 2009, 20:18:31 UTC
...when I was writing, I had in mind that Sasuke's situation is sort of gently sad, but... not for that reason.

(Firstly, the impression I took from Asuka-sempai's originals and the challenge was that, despite other people interacting with her that way, Saki-chan is not actually a full-blown alter: Sasuke may be mildly dissassociative, but he didn't actually fragment when he began building the "Uchiha Sasuke, super rookie" persona -- and that that persona is, in its own way, as much of one as Saki-chan. Although possibily less, by this point, since Saki-chan's been handling a lot of the interaction on several different levels.)

The thing with "only gets to come out" is that the only one keeping Sasuke from interacting with the Uchiha Commune at home or on vacation is Sasuke; he's been slowly phasing down his need for that particular persona, but he's been in enough of a holding pattern for a while that he really hasn't had any impetus to change. (Hinata and Ino and especially Naruto, while they do care deeply about Sasuke, don't ( ... )

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trishalynn August 13 2009, 11:41:10 UTC
Re: Uchiha Roll Call! (2) luriko_ysabeth August 13 2009, 01:46:45 UTC
That and... in some of my comments, I was a little blunt about how the family works in practical terms, which has little or nothing to do with emotional relationships -- for instance, if rocks fell and some of the kids died, it wouldn't change the *way* the family worked, but naturally everyone would be griefstricken.

If Sasuke/Saki thought a useful purpose would be served by being present in the household as Sasuke, he would; but between the fact that Saki's mannerisms translate to family presence rather better than Sasuke's and unsettling memories with the older kids -- kids LIKE having stability, such as knowing that a given parent is always going to be the same person -- he decided not to burden the kids with his presence even before starting to not need to be Sasuke for days on end.

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