Comments | lure247: Retrograde CHAPTER THIRTEEN

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Retrograde CHAPTER THIRTEEN

Feb 06, 2011 15:23

Title: Retrograde
Author Lure247 (AKA Laura)
Characters/Pairings: previous Noah/Luke, but there'll be none of that continuing in the story Luke / Reid
Summary: Luke ends up in Parkland hospital Dallas, severely injured, luckily one of the world's top neurosurgeons is on call that night. Unfortunately for Luke, he seems to have lost something ( Read more... )

retrograde, luke/reid, lure_atwt

Comments 20

ganeshalemming February 6 2011, 16:02:05 UTC

Whoooo, intense!!! I don't think I drew breath until the trash can was kicked.

And that was really superb use of dialogue from the show!

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:54:32 UTC

;)

Thank you and glad you liked the dialogue reversal

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biu07 February 6 2011, 16:07:51 UTC

Wonderful!!! I love how you use Reid's lines from the soap making them Luke's now. I like this Luke who is confident when it comes to state their mutual attraction. You definitely made my day!Thank you!

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:55:28 UTC

Thanks so much, I like taking phrases from the show and seeing how I can switch them around, makes it interesting.

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joann414 February 6 2011, 16:46:46 UTC

Beautifully written chapter.

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:55:38 UTC

Thanks so much

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shadownyc February 6 2011, 18:54:23 UTC

Very exciting chapter! Loved Luke's boldness.

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:55:51 UTC

Cheers ;)

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chameleonen February 6 2011, 21:37:14 UTC

Wow... This was so intense... I always love your first make out scenes for our guys and this one made me feel the same way as Attached. Even I love all your stories this one and Attached are my favorites and I love that Luke are in control of the situation, knowing just how Reid is feeling.

Brillant writing...

<3 Annie

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:56:29 UTC

aww, glad you are liking this as much as attached, hope it's filling the gap that it left.

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