Comments | lure247: Retrograde CHAPTER THIRTEEN

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Retrograde CHAPTER THIRTEEN

Feb 06, 2011 15:23

Title: Retrograde
Author Lure247 (AKA Laura)
Characters/Pairings: previous Noah/Luke, but there'll be none of that continuing in the story Luke / Reid
Summary: Luke ends up in Parkland hospital Dallas, severely injured, luckily one of the world's top neurosurgeons is on call that night. Unfortunately for Luke, he seems to have lost something ( Read more... )

retrograde, luke/reid, lure_atwt

Comments 20

lane_montgomery February 6 2011, 22:15:42 UTC

Count me among those holding my breath the whole time. Very intense! I'm so glad the truth is coming out...

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:57:00 UTC

Hope you are breathing again now, seeing as it's a whole new day ;) Glad you liked it

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ltklo February 6 2011, 22:40:26 UTC

That was completely mesmerizing!

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:57:16 UTC

aww shucks, thanks very much

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rtruffles February 6 2011, 23:48:14 UTC

This was really intense. I loved the way that you gave Luke's show dialogue to Reid. Great job!

I was sad that Reid ran away but I felt that it was completely in character for him at the same time. Reid always seemed liked a solid character, completely committed to being a doctor. I can imagine him breaking the rules, but only if it was in the best interest of the patient. (Of course this is in Luke's best interest hehe) I think that he would feel uncomfortable crossing that particular line!

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:58:13 UTC

Thank you, I like switching phrases between Luke and Reid, spices things up a bit.

I'm glad you can see why I had Reid run away, was a little worried that people would be a little angry, but I also feel it's what he would do right now.

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dpracket February 7 2011, 05:53:05 UTC

Reid! Ethics shmethics! Heehee... But really, Reid is a standup guy, so I can see him not wanting to violate the doctor/patient relationship.

But dang...if that wasn't some hot kissing.

And I love how you gave them each other's words from the show. Nice change up! :)

Love this fic!

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:58:59 UTC

I love a good word switch-a-roo, getting Luke to say Reid's line and visa versa, it's fun to try and get it in the right context.

Glad you liked the kissing ;)

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shar_jere February 7 2011, 18:26:35 UTC

oooh wow that was intense!!

lure247 February 7 2011, 20:59:10 UTC

Thanks so much Shar....

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