28 Needlenoses

May 23, 2007 14:14

Bring it.

1. Naughty Needlenose - claimed by sapphirebreeze
2. Happy Needlenose
3. Silly Needlenose - claimed by sapphirebreeze
4. Angsty Needlenose
5. On-Vacation Needlenose - claimed by sapphirebreeze
6. Horny Needlenose - claimed by dualistic
7. Transforming Needlenose
8. Excited Needlenose
9. Book-Reading Needlenose - claimed by raisedbymoogles
10. Dancing Needlenose - claimed by koilungfish, with his Nebulans ( Read more... )

character: needlenose, writing: fanfic, writing: 28s

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Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D lunatron June 17 2007, 02:10:28 UTC
14. On-His-Knees NeedlenoseNeedlenose knelt, hands shackled behind him. He was trying very hard not to start sobbing. He wondered if it showed. Needlenose felt as if the other Decepticons, the real Decepticons could see right through him, to his quivering little core ( ... )

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Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D koilungfish July 4 2007, 21:46:11 UTC
Heheh. Not sure exactly why Needlenose is being flogged, but I really like the last line. Excellent.

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Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D lunatron July 4 2007, 21:59:42 UTC
Well, Needlenose is in Basic. His unit needed him, and he instead hid in a foxhole. So they all died, with the strong implication that more would have lived if he hadn't been a little wussy boy. This is why he's being flogged.

I'm really happy with the last line.

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Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :D koilungfish July 4 2007, 22:05:42 UTC
Right, gotcha.

So you should be. It's good.

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