Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :DlunatronJune 17 2007, 02:10:28 UTC
14. On-His-Knees NeedlenoseNeedlenose knelt, hands shackled behind him. He was trying very hard not to start sobbing. He wondered if it showed. Needlenose felt as if the other Decepticons, the real Decepticons could see right through him, to his quivering little core
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Re: oooh! oooh! oooh! :DlunatronJuly 4 2007, 21:59:42 UTC
Well, Needlenose is in Basic. His unit needed him, and he instead hid in a foxhole. So they all died, with the strong implication that more would have lived if he hadn't been a little wussy boy. This is why he's being flogged.
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I'm really happy with the last line.
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So you should be. It's good.
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