Gundam Wing Comic

[luel_exana]

For the past few days I have been working diligently on a "secret project". To be more specific, I've been drawing a Gundam Wing comic of scribbly proportions. It's gratuitous fantasy AU, which happens to be my novel-reading-genre of choice. I've had some other story ideas bouncing around for a while, but this one came as a spur-of-the-moment after

Comments

[merith]

oh very nice! i like it a lot and am looking forward to more.

[luel_exana]

Thank you! Hopefully I'll get my drawing-groove going, so I can finish this.

[yanagi_wa]

This is really nice. The art is clean and active, the panels are set out well. I would pay money for this one. Great work.

[luel_exana]

Wow, thank you! That is high praise. Especially considering how scribbly all my lines are. I do try hard to incorporate movement in all my figures and panels, so thank you for noticing that! : )

[kitsuneyasashii]

i really like this. it's so simple but also so intriguing. i don't know if you meant to do this, but i like how it starts out very rough and sketchy, and the later panels are very nicely detailed. it draws in the eye a little more, i think.
anyway, id be really interested to see more. :)

[luel_exana]

The progression from rough and sketchy to more detailed and clean is purely a result of my good/bad drawing days. Well, and my growing level of actually caring about what the art looks like. Though I did try use a more wispy drawing style for the somber moments. Thank you for noticing! : )

[rurounitriv]

No time for much commentary, except "WOW!" and "MORE!" If nothing else, you have the characterization down, it's very Duo. (Although I don't see how even Duo could tolerate the smell of charred corpse.

[luel_exana]

Saying that Duo is in character is high praise indeed. Thank you! And the whole smell issue occurred to me too... AFTER I finished that page. haha So thank you for pointing that out too. It made me think about that some more, so now I know where I want the next few pages to go.

[badninja]

=Awesome-

[luel_exana]

Thank you!