Step Down

Dec 05, 2008 21:20

Title: Step Down
Author: elucreh
Pairing: Implied Panic Bandsome
Rated: PG-13
Summary: Cassie watches them dance in the writhing crowd, absently rolling her shoulders against Jon's fingertips, and doesn't know whether she envies her friends or not.
Notes: The "Girlfriends" section of the Ill-Kept Secret 'Verse. Patently untrue: no man updating his blog ( Read more... )

'verse: ill-kept secret, character: brendon urie, ship: panic gsf, fandom: bandom, rating: pg-13, character: spencer smith, genre: fluff, character: jon walker, genre: humor, character: ryan ross

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vixalicious December 6 2008, 04:43:22 UTC
Aw, I really like this! It's melancholy, but still shows love. Is the 'taradiddle' thing on purpose though?

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elucreh December 6 2008, 04:45:21 UTC
Thanks! That's pretty much where I was aiming, so it's good to hear. *G*

(YES. OMG. IT'S A REAL DRUMMING TERM. Spencer talks about them on his drum-endorsement webpage, and I find it hilarious.)

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vixalicious December 6 2008, 04:48:04 UTC
Sorry, I thought it was a typo - I know how to do paradiddles, maybe I just haven't gotten to those yet!

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elucreh December 6 2008, 04:52:13 UTC
Hey, you actually, like, know what that means? Really? *in awe* My reaction to reading the webpage was, "Is he just making up funny words, or does he mean that?"

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trinity_clare December 6 2008, 04:46:59 UTC
Honestly, the girlfriends are so cute that I don't even see the GSF. *hearteyes*

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elucreh December 6 2008, 04:51:13 UTC
The GSF is coming out a lot more subtly in most of these than I had originally intended. *G*

Thanks!

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liketheroad December 6 2008, 04:47:35 UTC
<333333

I think this was saddest and best all at once: Because, whatever else--Jon's happy now; happy like he never could have been with just Cassie and a camera. He's got somewhere to go, now, and people to go with

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elucreh December 6 2008, 04:49:29 UTC
That's always my favorite thing about Jon, you know? All those interviews where he basically says, "I had no purpose or direction, and then I met my boyfriends lovers bandmates and suddenly MY LIFE HAD MEANING."

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liketheroad December 6 2008, 04:58:44 UTC
I KNOW! ♥

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vic_ramsey December 6 2008, 05:11:58 UTC
I really like the tone of this fic. It was kind of sad and you could see how Cassie still loved Jon, even if his love was all for her anymore.

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elucreh December 6 2008, 05:13:26 UTC
Thanks, darlin'. I'm sorry you wound up with the sad one dedicated to you!

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mrsquizzical December 6 2008, 10:06:27 UTC
ok. hi. and now i'm like WISTFUL and MELANCHOLY and still sort of smiling.

there is going to be, like, really HOT making out and gsf as a pay off, right?

(all the half-sentence conversations and air drumming were so right.)

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elucreh December 6 2008, 12:35:46 UTC
Hee, actually I think they really do go home and write all night and fall asleep on top of their instruments and all have to shower separately to save time in the morning--because that's part of being in love, for them.

When there's less inspiration around, there's lots of hot making out, though. *G*

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