Can and Will Be Used Against You - mutinousmuse

Oct 16, 2005 15:19

Title: Can and Will Be Used Against You
Author: mutinousmuse
Pairing/Character: V/L, V/L(amb)
Word Count: 4, 105
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Veronica gets hauled in. Smuttiness ensues.
Spoilers: Through 2x03
Author’s Notes: Inspired by the fabulous Lamb fans over at rack_of_lamb and written for the loveathons bondage challenge. Whatever you do, please do not link to this ( Read more... )

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schnappycat October 16 2005, 22:31:53 UTC
Sends link now.

JK!!

I will totally read tonight when it is quiet and I am alone. Heh.

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mutinousmuse October 16 2005, 23:49:25 UTC
*has a heart attack*

Yeah, so, not the sort of thing I want certain parties to be reading... ;)

Can't wait to hear what you think. Lamb=Hott!

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tastylilgifty December 6 2005, 02:29:50 UTC
Best. Icon. Ever.

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archerstar December 18 2005, 07:49:29 UTC
Seconded.

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queen_haq October 16 2005, 22:37:09 UTC
Don't worry, it'll be fine. I don't think anyone will miss BOTH the warnings and if they do, they're incredibly stupid and we'll hunt them down, okay?

Now for the review:
Gah! I love how in character Lamb is since that is what makes him so fucking hot in my mind. He's such a bitch in this fic and I love it!

Man, that Veronica is a lucky, lucky chick.

And have I mentioned how much I love bossy Logan. "As soon as your eyes close, my hand stops." EEhh.. I love Logan! And I love you for writing such a hot, smutty piece of fic and taking it to another level completely. You are truly talented.

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mutinousmuse October 16 2005, 23:53:24 UTC
Oh, thank you, Lazeema. Compliments from you always make me happy. :) <-- see, happy!

*puts nose to grindstone*

I reeeeeeeeeelly am hoping to finish CB6 tonight. Feel free to whip me if I don't.

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queen_haq October 17 2005, 00:23:49 UTC
I have my whips ready!

PS.. You will also be getting Alive from me. Oh god, the chapter that's making me nauseous and giving me nightmares just might be completed today.

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mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 00:29:11 UTC
*pats you on the head in an attempt to fortify your strength, but instead comes across as condescending*

*sigh*

Oh, and you may want to take a look at my LJ... :)

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chaotic4life October 16 2005, 23:44:09 UTC
OMG! You pulled it off!

This is extremely hot.
And Lamb...incredibly how you pulled his worst characteristics and just twisted them a little more.

And Power Logan, wow! He's the man.

Also, just when I thought this is going too far, you pulled it around and made Logan the sweet guy he is. The timing was perfect for me.
Love this!

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mutinousmuse October 16 2005, 23:56:49 UTC
What a lovely review! I'm glad you thought that "softening" it a bit was a good choice. I was actually worried that it might be a bit jarring, but I didn't want it to be completely Wam!Bam!Thankyouma'am! on his part, because that's not even remotely in character.

Thanks for your fabulous feedback! :)

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ladydisdain225 October 17 2005, 00:03:32 UTC
The softening moments were what sold it for me. That the instant she wasn't having fun he backed off. It felt very real.

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mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 00:22:34 UTC
Thanks so much! I love getting detailed feedback - it's incredibly helpful for future writing. :)

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jaded_icy_rose October 17 2005, 02:50:08 UTC
Wow...it's awesome.

Although I don't really like Lamb, I still envied Veronica. Go you ^_^

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mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 02:52:55 UTC
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it despite your Lamb aversion. :)

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juleet October 17 2005, 03:45:37 UTC
::thunk::

so hot.

::collapses again from the searing heat::

X)

-julee

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mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 03:50:07 UTC
Glad you liked! *pokes you* Say, you're okay down there, right?

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