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Can and Will Be Used Against You - mutinousmuse

Oct 16, 2005 15:19

Title: Can and Will Be Used Against You
Author: mutinousmuse
Pairing/Character: V/L, V/L(amb)
Word Count: 4, 105
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Veronica gets hauled in. Smuttiness ensues.
Spoilers: Through 2x03
Author’s Notes: Inspired by the fabulous Lamb fans over at rack_of_lamb and written for the loveathons bondage challenge. Whatever you do, please do not link to this ( Read more... )

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Comments 33

jaggedreality October 17 2005, 05:25:18 UTC

Wow...there are just no words. Hot does not seem adequate

I want you to know that I blame you and queen_haq for my recently developed Lamb love.

mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 05:38:14 UTC

Thanks! And happy to have corrupted you... heh heh heh...

truemyth October 17 2005, 08:37:01 UTC

I felt everyone was slightly OOC in this, but all to the same degree, as if I was viewing them with my head tilted ever-so to one side and through the haze of eyelashes drifting closed. But hell, isn't that a good way to view sexiness? If you want to talk my view on character more, look me up on AIM sometime.

I loved how quickly you wrote Duncan out of the story. I liked the fact that Lamb and Logan had to recognize a connection that they now have through this moment, even though the moment itself was full of only competition and conquest.

mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 13:19:51 UTC

Heh, I agree with you on characterization, actually. I think in order to throw them into this scenario, which would *never* happen, it was a bit inevitable. So yeah - I sacrificed characterization for "plot" - by which I mean, smut-value. ;)

iwillrememberu October 17 2005, 11:10:29 UTC

Hee,this cracks me up how you're so scared of Michael reading this!But I understand...

I also liked how Logan just pulled her up when she was on her knees.

Very nice fic :)

mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 13:20:43 UTC

Glad you find it amusing. ;) And thanks - happy you liked it! :)

havemy_heart October 17 2005, 16:00:28 UTC

Thank you for this :D I reeeeaally shouldn't have read it at work, but too late now!

mutinousmuse October 17 2005, 23:23:21 UTC

You're on loveathons at work? *shakes head in disapproval*

Wait, who am I kidding? If it weren't blocked where I work, I'd be on, too!

Glad you liked it. :)

tastylilgifty December 6 2005, 02:26:39 UTC

That was THE hottest VM fic I have ever read. Holy shit.

;)

And, wait... do you really believe that thewzard is Michael?